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Sep 01, 2023

A lovely opening scene, and Grace seems to really be enjoying herself at school! but with her, and in the dream, even school can be fun and magical :DD

oh!!!! Haru not liking and not having eaten sweets before so Grace is unable to taste them is 😭😭😭 what a satisfying plot point when he decided to go try some sweets just for her (his friends: ????? who r u), I can see him throwing himself outside of his comfort zone to try everything just to give Grace that opportunity! 😳

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:4

Sep 01, 2023

AJKDHFJLKHS the wind on his empty palms I felt that....oh to actually be able to make your lucid dream cooperate with you 😔

...oh no Grace! What do you mean on giving up on becoming human D: the first chapter made me feel like when she first appeared she didn't quite recall who and where she was, I wonder if that has changed now and what has happened between then and now 😭 still, she doesn't seem jaded, just doing her best to make the best of the situation~~

akjhfsksa Haru's like, no this canNOT be my dream waifu I refuse to believe it 😂 it seems you cannot lie to your own subconsciousness

AND AW YEAH DATING SIM GAME it's Grace route time :DDDDD

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:3

Sep 01, 2023

OHHHH his parents' company is researching dreams, I think I know where that's going....👀👀 (not actually)

I'm excited to see the fun dream science that you come up with here ;D
I specifically took sleep biology classes in uni because one of my earliest stories was this weird battle shounen that took place in dreams and all I really learned is that we Still Know Nothing about dreams which is great 😂😂

I WONDER IF THE UMBRELLA GIRL is a small Grace cameo or just Haru unconsciously noticing 'umbrella' and 'girl' because of Grace ahskfhjd and lmaoo his utter lack of disinterest in his friends' business because sleep is more important I can relate 😂

poor Haru....not getting to enjoy any of the anime tropes of his dreams in his dreams bUT the opportunity to be a kid again! waifu character for damage control fr 😔 good on him though for taking that leap of faith with Grace! yeah "it's just a dream" Haru but u bet the colour from your dreams will bleed into your monotone life whether you like it or not 😤

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:2

Sep 01, 2023

dreams are fun and all until you fall :(

also the dream girl popping out of existence foreshadowing is fun teehee, well, less foreshadowing than "unsuspecting side character says something spot-on" but it's a fun bit nevertheless!

ALSO DRESS UP GACHA GIRL LOL I love how Haru is questioning his own tastes (Grace u are perfect do not fear), and it's fun (and kind of sad) to see Haru using his dreams to escape impending adulthood and losing colour in his world, even if irl SUCKS I'm sure your dreams will remain colourful Haru 🤝

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:1

Aug 31, 2023

LOL I'm dying over the fact that the illusion (?) Arabella was the same as always ahjkfljhdsf emotional damage even in the not real world. the castle and tower seem very aesthetic! another battle....and Kousuke can finally use the weeb sect techniques for good hahaha!

and OH! it really took a dream world showing Arabella's death for him to come to terms with his feelings, thank goodness it's not irl....hopefully 😭 despite the circumstances, it's a good turning point for him though! I wonder if Arabella feels the same way....👁️👁️

Writing a Guidebook with You

Chapter:20

Aug 31, 2023

Kousuke being confused as to why he's still kinda trying to romance Arabella means he's probably starting to catch feelings hehehe. A lot of interesting lore and characters here! Antony's powers are very interesting. I am glad they get to hold hands just before everything goes....downhill, that last line is scary 😱😱😱

Writing a Guidebook with You

Chapter:19

Aug 31, 2023

ohh, Kousuke is good at this planning...! sort of. getting called dumb by your fiance can count as...something romantic, maybe :D but wow! they did manage to beat the minotaur after all, no wonder it took so much effort, it was decades of effort (wipes single tear)

Mochita is.....smarter than he seems, helping crocodiles with romance troubles LOL it's time to help out Kousuke too!!! he's struggling over here 😔

Writing a Guidebook with You

Chapter:18

Aug 31, 2023

oh dear, everyone fighting each other instead of the minotaur...but maybe that was all for the sweet moment for the two of them to tag team to beat it up 😍😍

a cringe person will always be cringe LOLOL I'm glad that, though they were beating each other up, Arabella and Felis were able to reach an understanding and become friends! sort of......hopefuly.......

Writing a Guidebook with You

Chapter:17

Aug 15, 2023

To:dmz

thank you SO much for taking the time to read everything and leave such insightful comments, I appreciate it a ton! A supernatural club could technically work too! but yeah thematically we gotta go with theatre for the full circle ;D OMG YEAH they could cheat like that and everyone's like, wow their theatre club is amazing!!! akfhkasf

and yeah pretty much the rest of their club life will be sket dance-esque hehehe, just slice of life chaos before idk, some gigantic monster attacks or smth ;D

I really appreciate that you enjoyed the sense of humour in this story! Your humour is a ton of fun and fits your story very well, so it's an honour to hear that! I will be dropping by to finish your entry once I'm done mine (I have discovered we are halfway through August gghhgh LOL), thank you again for giving this a read, congrats on finishing your entry and I super look forward to reading the rest of it as soon as I can !!!