Jul 29, 2023
oh my gosh, if the first chapter was the hook, this chap was the line and sinker and the wholeeee fish!!!! I laughed, felt a bad for Jun, felt Really bad for Amamiya, and the whole book concept with Mia's language wrapped this chapter up so wonderfully with a bow! This is worded incredibly chaotically but I love how the events in this chap give such a clear and concise direction for their relationship now, along with Jun's eventual growth, learning about what he was like in the past, as well as for the reader to experience. The parallels to his relationship with Amamiya back on earth are SO good, and Madam Claire giving him the opportunity to figure out where he went wrong (by letting him do it all over again but just as an elf) will certainly be an Experience haha! Madam Claire giving advice while as a bird was hilarious, paired with "I need to go commune with trees" LOL maybe it's good this world's Mia is so timid rn otherwise their cover is gonna be blown aksfhdkajhfj
(im thinking too far ahead now but I'm starting to wonder if Mia and Amamiya have the same soul or not and if Jun's going back to his previous life or staying in this isekai world forever and if it's the former if Amamiya will inherit Mia's memories and if it's the latter if he'll need to say goodbye to his first relationship and the consequences surrounding all of that aaAAAAA please ignore this rambling I am sure you will give them a satisfying and wholesome conclusion I;m just theorycrafting) 👀
