IceDonut

IceDonut

25 | him/his | European

Writing since 2016 to find the fine line between the bittersweet beauty of sorrow and the feeling of deep human connection, creating worlds that provide shelter from reality, but also embrace its way of being.
I occasionally write comments/critiques that could be short stories on their own, so sorry for all the flooded comment sections 😅
Read into my current novel "Celluloid", if you are interested!

registered at: Sep 08, 2021
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    Oct 31, 2022

    The risks of civil courage, if you don't know the full picture ... I don't think the girl is to be blamed there, honestly. I mean she was obviously beaten and then pressured into calling Hideki out as the molester/rapist(?). Still not okay, but understandable if you ask me.
    It was written just great and I was even slightly sweating from the eyes at one point, but I still have my troubles with plots about putting the blame for something that could be actually proofed easily onto someone else. I know that stories like those happen to a degree or another in reality, but Japan in fact is a constitutional state and to make it actually fully, justifiably realistic, other stuff would need to be addressed or shuffled around.
    But well, it's not really a core of this story, but rather a back story, so it is not that problematic. It just has a tint of "oh, my character needed some dramatic backstory to make the audience empathize with him". And I don't want to say that this event didn't shape Hideki as a character, but it has no real relevance for the plot (yet). I could imagine, that when they all turn against one another in the last day (I guess it was hinted that this is a possibility) that he gets PTSD flashbacks from the events and freaks out. But I would call that a rather loose connection 😉

    Nonetheless I really liked that chapter! Hideki entrusted Ayase with a secret and she keeps it for him now. They even held hands! If that isn't a development (despite Hideki still being dense as ever) , what is? 😊😂🫶

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