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Just another writer/reader like you!
Hopefully, one day my writings will become a book that many people come to love and be inspired by.
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Jan 01, 2025
i really like their relationship! it's very charming
Dec 31, 2024
To:kazesenken
i tried to make it as psychological as possible let’s see if i stick it 😅
Definitely had a lot of fun writing this and the result was this haha it really will take some time for that plot like to develop
The philosophy of being human is coming back around i see, interesting
To:lolitroy
She quite literally never learns 😭😭😭
i’m enjoying the vibe so far, and i can really see the potential for this one. Keep it up!
i keep reading to wonder what it’s about but idk. What is it about? There’s some comedic elements to this and a meandering plot, but there’s no setting. It’s in the middle of nowhere & it’s pure inner voice and dialogue. i would like to see exactly where they are and why this is a future reality as opposed to be said so and it being a beach.
Dec 30, 2024
This reminds me of one of those summer camps you’re forced to go to work overly enthusiastic camp counselors haha
Dec 27, 2024
Fuck i didn’t expect that. So they were poisoned i imagine
To:Steward McOy
i had pondered on that last line and was like mmmm idk lmao but i always am a goober for internal commitments
Dec 26, 2024
it's quite zany and awkward which i think work well for this first chapter
Dec 25, 2024
a really good start and the dialogue flows well!
Dec 24, 2024
To:obliviousbushtit
Life is yeah
i think this is a realistic future that you've described, and it doesn't feel very far off. The prose works well to show and there was almost a matrix moment of when she disconnected. Quite the interesting theme to be honest
