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Just another writer/reader like you!
Hopefully, one day my writings will become a book that many people come to love and be inspired by.
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Jan 12, 2025
that sucks like you sign up for some high tech brain preservation just to end up on reality tv lmao this is a cool concept though, nice!
Jan 11, 2025
To:Rowan.Burns
thanks for checking out! i am excited to reread the new version of your story
Fuck this is good. The dialogue really hits. Lena is so ignorant but likable! The producer is a reality check many people who have so many fans and yes man don’t have.
Jan 10, 2025
To:Ashley
thank you !
To:Moon
preserve your mind while you have a chance!
To:Slow
i don't really game so i hadn't heard of it but it looks really cool, imma have to check it out now lol! thats dope
i tried to get the psychological aspect across and the eeriness of their condition.
Jan 09, 2025
will he do it? The impossible? But in all seriousness, the action is really good and the concept of rogue bounty hunters collecting money for the resource is interesting, esp with the theme of gentrification.
Jan 07, 2025
To:obliviousbushtit
it really is, congrats on finishing!
(*^*)(*^*) haha yes!
The ego of Lena is becoming really apparent so far, and it reeks of an aging star unable to adapt or get with the times. She struggles to change and move forward in an honest way yet is too fragile and jealous to do so. A strong theme. Hopefully, it will be relevant. Really good so far
the writing is very sharp. the curt sentences, and repeated phrases that linger. Her distraction away from the truth through the collar fixation i thought worked well
Jan 06, 2025
the prose is quite sharp and already has a nice world i can imagine!
nice ending!
Jan 05, 2025
Marsia is best girl! But i really like the POV re-telling of the same events and the slowing down of time really went over well in this chapter!
