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Jun 07, 2023

Mina sounds like a dependable girl... I'll pretend I didn't read the synopsis. 🙈

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:1

Jun 07, 2023

I saw a maid so I had to check it out 😍

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:0

Jun 06, 2023

Man, this novel is so cute! I am curious about where the plot would go, there hasn't been that much setup for that, or did I read over it?

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:1

Jun 06, 2023

I thought the chapter was written in a way that made it easy to read, which is enjoyed. Sounds like a decent introduction to your story.

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:1

Jun 03, 2023

To:kazesenken

Haha, I feel like people expect them to be integrated in some way😅 . I hope it fits this story well.

The Nerd's Love for the Popular Girl's Secret Indie Band

Chapter:1

Jun 03, 2023

I really love the premise of this. I like the idea of the fairy tale like - alice in wonderland esque dream world you've created. Keep it up!

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:0

Jun 03, 2023

Time to enter the matrix

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

Glad to see Cupid has entered the modern age replacing arrows with bazookas.

Cupids’ Errand: Romance UnBound

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

A decent start to an isekai. Of course, she would think he is a demon. I think he would soon regret turning down the safe ride.

The Wild Daffodil

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

To:WALKER

Thank you a lot, I am glad you like the setup, I tried my best to come up with something unique. Writing a father-son bond is definitely new for me, so I hope to be able to do something cool with that.

The Nerd's Love for the Popular Girl's Secret Indie Band

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

To:Bubbles

Haha, thank you for your time Bubbles to write such an extensive critique. I recognize the whole slideshow thing, it feels sometimes like I am summarizing a story instead of actually playing it out. There are a lot of ideas I have where I could go with the father-son drama as well as the romance aspect, which will take a couple of chapters before it really gets going. Thank you for giving me a lot of points to improve on.

The Nerd's Love for the Popular Girl's Secret Indie Band

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

To:Kitsune

I used to play around with some music-producing software in the past, although my mind may have gotten a bit foggy. Please notice me if I mess up any of the terminology XD

The Nerd's Love for the Popular Girl's Secret Indie Band

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

The toilet paper joke made me chuckle. I think the girl is funny, I could totally imagine her as an anime character.

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

I love the amountof details there are to this, like the details about company takeovers and private servers. You clearly know a lot about 'MMO-lore'. Keep it up!

Maniavolution

Chapter:1

Jun 01, 2023

This is quite a fun setup for a novel. The cover + description looked appealing. I participated once in a 'Santa run' with some friends, and we were able to keep the Santa outfits afterward. They became quite the inside joke for a while. Enough with the rambling... I am curious what his date will be like!

Pretty Boy Gangster

Chapter:1

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