Jun 02, 2023
To:Bubbles
Haha, thank you for your time Bubbles to write such an extensive critique. I recognize the whole slideshow thing, it feels sometimes like I am summarizing a story instead of actually playing it out. There are a lot of ideas I have where I could go with the father-son drama as well as the romance aspect, which will take a couple of chapters before it really gets going. Thank you for giving me a lot of points to improve on.
