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Jun 02, 2023

The toilet paper joke made me chuckle. I think the girl is funny, I could totally imagine her as an anime character.

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

I love the amountof details there are to this, like the details about company takeovers and private servers. You clearly know a lot about 'MMO-lore'. Keep it up!

Maniavolution

Chapter:1

Jun 01, 2023

This is quite a fun setup for a novel. The cover + description looked appealing. I participated once in a 'Santa run' with some friends, and we were able to keep the Santa outfits afterward. They became quite the inside joke for a while. Enough with the rambling... I am curious what his date will be like!

Pretty Boy Gangster

Chapter:1

Jun 01, 2023

Thank you for your comment! I had to use the maid-theme somewhere.

The Nerd's Love for the Popular Girl's Secret Indie Band

Chapter:1

Jun 01, 2023

I like this concept a lot, I think it's quite marketable. The text was quite easy to read. My only 'critique' is that I can't help myself but think about the 'angel next door' if I read the name / cover. An unfortunate coincidence I figure...

The Vtuber Next Door

Chapter:1

Jun 01, 2023

Haha, this surely changed a lot since I read the first draft. I feel like it was written quite well, and a lot more action-focused than before. Quite interested in what's next :D

Enchanted by a Witch From a Realm Called Earth

Chapter:1

May 10, 2023

In a zombie apocalypse, a million people must be half the world's population. Mr. Beast can't keep up with that.

Right here on my phone!!!

Chapter:2

May 10, 2023

Time for some viral zombies!

Right here on my phone!!!

Chapter:1

May 08, 2023

Haha, this was funny

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:8

May 02, 2023

Who needs war when we can have a pjyama party right?

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:7

May 02, 2023

Poor gynoid, they deserver hugs too.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:6

May 02, 2023

Always wondered if cute anime girls ever used the toilet. Let's see who this Claire person is.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:5

Jan 16, 2023

Everyone knows that the only thing that matters during spaceflights is their outfits right? Neil Armstrong year 5013 after the third impact.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:2

Jan 16, 2023

Haha, interesting worldbuilding but also kind of funny. They are shippers of the space ship and also getting shipped themselves. Interested in where this is going to go!

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:1

Jan 08, 2023

To:Dracors

Haha, I should have added a disclaimer: "Don't eat purple apples at home kids " 😉

4 hours to save the world

Chapter:3

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