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Kya Hon

He/They | Writer and Artist
Writing "Pigeon on a Power Line" for the Mal X Honeyfeed 2023 Contest
Finalist in the 2022 Contest with, "Are You Real?"
Pfp Art by Pit, @pawkaray on twitter

registered at: May 13, 2022

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Jun 16, 2023

Why's she all caked up like that inside a Mickey D's? Ong

McMami

Chapter:1

Jun 15, 2023

Damn, the dialogue was pretty sharp and densely contextualized both worlds, well done

Enchanted by a Witch From a Realm Called Earth

Chapter:4

Jun 15, 2023

To:Steward McOy

You all know 'em, you all love 'em

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:5

Jun 13, 2023

To:Deleted User

No you're definitely right, although the miss perfect title is def. something of a double edged sword- it's just as much a chain of keeping up appearances as it is a link to one's own confidence

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:6

Jun 13, 2023

To:Kitsune

It's not just the song title, it's the band name 🤠

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:5

Jun 13, 2023

To:Deleted User

Not gonna lie I can't remember if it was an intentional typo for the characterization on my part, but if it's noticeable it might be worth changing, ty tomo :*

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:5

Jun 13, 2023

The writing is very grounded and real in a way that implies you've read and written a fair bit, and I find it genuinely impressive. I'm also glad that we cleanly looped back around to the first chapter, though the sheer amount of names and life details in play is considerable. I sincerely hope we stabilize in a point in time soon, as although I personally don't mind a floating narrative it'd make it harder for me to keep up with it week by week

To you, A Lei of Daisies

Chapter:4

Jun 13, 2023

Consistently strong characterization as well as dialogue that's quite vivid, very based

To you, A Lei of Daisies

Chapter:3

Jun 13, 2023

Some strong characterization in this one, as well as a building sense of dread-- wondering just how exactly this is going to loop back to the first chapter since it appears to be a time jump

To you, A Lei of Daisies

Chapter:2

Jun 13, 2023

A very strongly-painted opening, with the music visualization and the emotional throughline being incredibly potent in the first half, though I have to note that there's something the tiniest bit formal/stiff about the way the dialogue flows in the second half (my theory being that people speak in many medium length clauses back to back)

To you, A Lei of Daisies

Chapter:1

Jun 09, 2023

To:Mech

Thank you so much, I poured a lot of love into crafting that vibe of a chaotic, caring family that surrounds our prickly but lovable female lead <3

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:4

Jun 08, 2023

Can't believe Yai said my name, I'm honored

On the Railway Wire

Chapter:3

Jun 08, 2023

To:Mech

I'm very happy that everyone is harping on the Warhammer irony, based luxury gay space communism

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:3

Jun 06, 2023

To:Steward McOy

I'm so glad someone gets the GW irony, it's such an out there reference 😭

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:3

Jun 05, 2023

Damn, I guess she must've been in the walls to pop out of nowhere like that-

jokes aside, there's nothing that brings people together like stories, it's a cute opener :*

Can You Read Me?

Chapter:1

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