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Hi! I‘m Nika, nice to read ya! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ I like to write cute stories about magic, friendship and adventure! ( ✿ •̀ ‸ •́ ✿ )
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Apr 26, 2025
To:lolitroy
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts! I think it's becoming more clear to me now that as a chronic underwriter, my characters suffer in the first draft (or rather, don't have any chance to be anything more than surface level because I don't give them enough page space to unfold). I think Nela benefitted most in this "restructuring" already and I hope that Leo shines a little more towards the end, but it's certainly something for me to keep in mind. I don't think I have it in me to do big edits like that for the remainder of this contest, but it's something I want to look out for in future stories/edits. Again, thank you for your comment! ☺️
Apr 25, 2025
To:obliviousbushtit
Aaaaaaah, thank you so much!! That means a lot to me :) Thank you so so much for reading and commenting!!
What a wonderful opening chapter. Great atmosphere!
Apr 21, 2025
To:Slow
Thank you so so so much for your comment! Thanks for reading all the way through, it means a lot to me. And I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Aaaaaahhh, it sounds like it worked! I'm glad to hear it - I'm not good with endings, but I really like this one. Thanks for reading and commenting!
I'm glad it worked!
She can be nice if she wants to be, haha
I get it - these chapters were the most painful to write and edit. Poor Leo. Thank you for your comment, Slow!
To:Shiro
Poor Leo :D but that's the price of style ☺️ thanks for reading and commenting, Shiro!
Oh noooo, that really sucks :( if you find the time, I'd love to hear your thoughts, no matter how long or short! Thanks for reading so far
Aaaaaahhh I'm glad to hear it! I'll also catch up with yours - looking forward to you finishing it!
To:SuperCoolNarutoGuy
I'm glad to hear it! :D
I really should have put a veneer of conlang on top of it... throw in an apostrophe here and there... but I think I'll keep that for maybe future edits haha. Thanks for checking my story out!
When the world (aka me during contest season) needed him most, he returned... SuperCoolNarutoGuy... my number one reader... thanks for checking it out, as always! ☺️
Apr 12, 2025
I'm glad it's working. The whole "different language" gimmick was fun at first, but I'm pretty sure if I took it any further it would really make it hard to read. So, it's a win-win :D