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aaa

Apr 18, 2023

Brilliant first chapter

Ersatz

Chapter:1

Dec 04, 2022

To:Makech

Thank YOU for sticking with the story! More to come!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:18

Sep 06, 2022

To:Makech

Congrats on finishing up Cupid's Blame! You were really pumping out the chapters down the stretch there and completed it with great quality, really impressive. Thanks again for all the support!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:12

Aug 16, 2022

This story has definitely been fun to read! I like and appreciate two characters together just vibing with their convos. One thing that I noticed is that the two say each other's name quite often in their conversation though. Since it's just the two of them alone in the hotel, I always knew who was talking cause you do a good job at making that obvious. So I feel you could maybe cut back on how often Furuya say's Nakano's name when he talks to her, and vice versa. That would make an already fun relationship and conversations feel more natural to the reader. Keep up the good work!

Down to Love

Chapter:4

Aug 14, 2022

To:Makech

Yeah he's been fighting his truest nature for a while now. It'll be good to find out what it was that has conflicted him to this point. Not to mention, what ever happened to the friends he left behind his final year in middle school? Might be time for one to show up to see what he has become. Thank you for reading to this point and commenting! I really appreciate it. I'm a couple chapters behind on Cupid, but I'm super excited to catch up!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:12

Aug 07, 2022

He sure has! What other explanation could there be for the sudden turnaround in grades? ;)

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:10

Aug 07, 2022

To:Yammu

I'm surprised more people haven't pointed that out lol.

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:2

Aug 07, 2022

To:Yammu

Hahahah I agree! Thank you for reading, I hope you continue and see where the rivalry between Togashi and Tani leads.

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:1

Aug 02, 2022

Love the historical accuracy of this chapter. The polar bear expedition immediately came to mind when she was explaining the history of 1918-20

Moritomo High Communist Club

Chapter:11

Jul 28, 2022

To:Makech

Thank you! I'm pretty stoked on the cover, the artist @Arialove did a great job making a pencil drawing of mine come to life like that.

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:9

Jul 25, 2022

To:shirayuriP

Yeah Shirai-sensei has a lot of work to do to get over her unreasonable fear of being single forever, let's hope that she can grow to be patient with herself and not try to force a romance, especially with Tani lol. Thank you for reading this far, I hope you continue to watch Tani try his best to achieve his dreams!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:2

Jul 25, 2022

To:shirayuriP

Thank you for reading! Haha I'm glad you like Tani, he's definitely very committed to being a certain brand of politician to achieve his goals at this point. But with the additions of members to the club, I wonder how long he can keep that villainous trait going!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:1

Jul 23, 2022

I'm excited to see them clean Shinzo's interior and throw down some knowledge of the proletariat! I absolutely love this story

Moritomo High Communist Club

Chapter:9

Jul 23, 2022

To:Makech

Haha I agree. Thankfully Anita is there to push him away from being a heartless politician! Thank you for catching up!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:7

Jul 18, 2022

Haha as smart as he is, he sure does a good job at not getting his way!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:3

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