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Mar 25, 2025

To:Orionless

Haha thank you! I'm sure I go overboard sometimes, but for this chapter is was intentional. It's fun to be silly and make the use of chopsticks seem like such an epic undertaking

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:5

Mar 19, 2025

You do such a great job with dialogue between your characters so far, I can really feel the personalities of the Gods, really fun!

Hanging by a Thread

Chapter:2

Mar 16, 2025

To:Orionless

Yeah I don't always have time to write so this story has taken a while, it's fun to write and I really like the characters so hopefully I can one day finish it up nicely. Knowing that a real person is reading definitely motivates me to do that, so thank you for that! I'll check out your work later tonight

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:2

Mar 15, 2025

To:Orionless

Some say a not so fun fact about life is that people in authority positions actually have no clue what they're doing either! Haha thank you for your comment, it's funny how much knowing an actual person is reading a story you've made brightens your day. I hope you enjoy going forward! I'll be checking out your work as well 👍

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:2

Mar 14, 2025

I have a confession to make, I lied about the pizza place near the Sumo Hall. Truth is I have eaten at the restaurant in real life and it is amazing. I highly recommend going if you're ever in Tokyo!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:28

Mar 14, 2025

To:Orionless

Haha thank you I'm glad to hear that, and thank you for reading! He's a real piece of work that guy, his forray into the crummy world of diplomacy is off to a hot start

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:1

Feb 15, 2025

If anyone is caught up to the point from start to finish, lemme know! It would motivate me to continue on and I'll even draw some more illustrations for those interested

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:25

Nov 16, 2023

Hello to anyone still reading to this point. Sorry for the long delay in posting! I plan on posting more frequently, but probably having shorter chapters to get the story progressing. Thanks for the support, feel free to comment or like, especially if you're one of the few caught up to this point. Even hearing from one of you is a huge motivation!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:24

May 24, 2023

Yeah true, a very niche type of world. But what drew me to it at first is that it reminded me of Trigun and got me nostalgic about one of the stories that got me into anime in the first place. As it's progressed it's definitely feeling like something brand new to me!

GUN SALAD

Chapter:49

May 22, 2023

To be honest, I'm a little disheartened to see that this story isn't getting more attention on this site. You're a very good writer and have created a very unique world. Keep up the great work!

GUN SALAD

Chapter:49

Apr 18, 2023

Brilliant first chapter

Ersatz

Chapter:1

Dec 04, 2022

To:Makech

Thank YOU for sticking with the story! More to come!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:18

Sep 06, 2022

To:Makech

Congrats on finishing up Cupid's Blame! You were really pumping out the chapters down the stretch there and completed it with great quality, really impressive. Thanks again for all the support!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:12

Aug 16, 2022

This story has definitely been fun to read! I like and appreciate two characters together just vibing with their convos. One thing that I noticed is that the two say each other's name quite often in their conversation though. Since it's just the two of them alone in the hotel, I always knew who was talking cause you do a good job at making that obvious. So I feel you could maybe cut back on how often Furuya say's Nakano's name when he talks to her, and vice versa. That would make an already fun relationship and conversations feel more natural to the reader. Keep up the good work!

Down to Love

Chapter:4

Aug 14, 2022

To:Makech

Yeah he's been fighting his truest nature for a while now. It'll be good to find out what it was that has conflicted him to this point. Not to mention, what ever happened to the friends he left behind his final year in middle school? Might be time for one to show up to see what he has become. Thank you for reading to this point and commenting! I really appreciate it. I'm a couple chapters behind on Cupid, but I'm super excited to catch up!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:12

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