Aug 26, 2022
I must admit, I'm weirded out. It feels off how you suddenly switch from first person to third person. In between the transition, you have both "I" and "Minato" in the same paragraph as if they were different people.
I also found it weird how it's all like, "oh, I found a strange seed two weeks ago" instead of an actual scene of him finding the seed like he discovered something new.
All those issues aside, I like your way of writing. It's pretty funny and engaging. The main character seems like a relatable and fun guy, doesn't have that cliche "I'm an otaku and I have no gf" and instead "a plant dude who helps out his grandma"
Reminds me of Dress-Up Darling, where the MC has a certain hobby and the main girl has some sort of connection to said hobby.
