Aug 30, 2022
Azamazing.
For me, I believe your characters are your greatest strength. I don't need to talk about how cool Azama is, so I'll focus on the other characters. The students may not be as flamboyant and charming as our beloved teacher, but they were still able to move the story forward during the later chapters. Being given the chances to shine, they were able to develop themselves as characters and make some significant changes along the way. Sometimes, their personalities would clash or end up in some rather ridiculous situations, which I find Azamazingly entertaining and comedic. They're also pretty much responsible for carrying the world building aspect of the story, the exact opposite of what Azama does because of his blatant narcissism, so you get to understand the lore of it all.
The story doesn't really seem to have a specific direction or end goal of some kind, but I believe it's because it's about the journey and whatever experience there is to have.
I actually think I should take some inspiration from the way you write, it just has those flashy charming vibes if you know what I mean.
Anyways, that's it.
Jaiga is best girl, excluding Azama ofc.
