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Short story guy forced to write long ones.
Aug 10, 2023
Shit it's taking a dark turn- Oh wait this is a dream world. But Kousuke's saying otherwise. 🤔 Well, guess ill just read the next lol.
To:Ducky123
Dang congrats for ending the first arc. Despite the story going so slow and having side-tracks at the start, it wraps up extremely nice by this chapter. Not everything is revealed yet, and still there was enough context to explain the big questions that were in my mind and therefore making me content lol. Also, seeing how Kei's mind shifting from an embarrassed and Ig 'horny' boy in the start into a more and more caring friend as the story progresses is just amazing. Especially since this all happened in a day, which only makes his struggle to becoming better even more hopeful. Well, it's obvious but I'll be looking forward to the next parts lol. Though 20 days left is a pretty short time, so I wish you the best of luck 👍
Well, there is still the possibility that she didn't even fall asleep at noon. The first reason for Yori's problem I thought of was way too extreme so Ig I'll read quietly for now lol.
Aug 09, 2023
It's a recorder instead of a influencer so ig that wasn't the origin of Grace in the first place lol. Stuff is getting really interesting.
Not a twist I thought was coming until Kasumi says she wanted to meet Grace lmao.
Aug 08, 2023
Nah it's just intended as a mild jest rather than a problem lol. Dw about it.
Aug 07, 2023
Well, judging from my experience, Ogden's not gonna have a comfortable time with the three alone lol. Would be funny if it's a ploy from Anne-Marie.
Aug 06, 2023
Guess Hanako's both Shou and his sister's consoler lol. Perhaps the lack of social interaction has made Shou too dense, well, glad that it would not be the case soon.
Hmm, I wonder if they'll have a nightmare and has to sooth the other back to sleep lol. The first day is already so eventful and full of drama for Kei, but somewhere along the ends of the day he was at least comfortable with joking with her once again. It's a nice slow progress, and I'm all here for the cute things interactions they'll be having. And other stuff, of course.
That's a lot in a single week 😦. Yeah you deserve your break from writing.
Dang, it's like you're giving me the hints as a bait and as I was just about to snap it you took it away lol.
Added a bit more foreshadow and made some small revamps.
To:kazesenken
Rip, I've only started playing an instrument two months ago, and it's a guitar. Lol.
Yeah I was guessing the same lol. Really got me curious.
I know it's not an ending, but goddamn the closure I felt. This kind of made me want to revise a bit on mine lol.