Jun 19, 2022
Honestly, I hate how fundamentally sound your writing is for a concept that doesn’t interest me all that much. Settings like Classroom of the Elite, Prison School, etc. have never really been series that were made for me, but somehow by your second chapter you have a way of drawing interest in me. I’m sure this is the case for tons of other people, too. Your dialogue game is distinct and I don’t think I even need qualifiers to know who is saying what. The descriptions and actions feel fluid, never really feeling stiff or boring.
For all of your shitposting on discord, there’s an actually talented and impactful writer there. I’ve read well past this point, but I wanted to re-read to make sure my first impressions were correct while leaving comments, and well, they are. This is top shelf setup. Not even a question about that.