Jun 16, 2022
It's a solid opener, overall. Most of what we, the readers, get out of this is the personality of the characters and from the jump there's a distinct voice in *just* the dialogue. If you took out of the first person introspectiveness, you still can hear the distinct difference which generally leads to a good prospect of a story.
I've been reading this for awhile but neglected to leave a comment, so I'll start there. The foundation is built and then comes the lore. Good stuff.