lolitroy

lolitroy

I usually read back as a courtesy but if you're gonna read JUST so I return the favor, heed my warning: I won't.

I do follow back in case it wasn't obvious, but I get bombarded by notifs (in case it wasn't obvious) from story updates, so if I haven't feel free to tell me in a comment or smth

apparently my writing style is too avant-garde for the weebs or some shit but if you ask me that's just a polite way to tell me I have terminal skill issue

registered at: Aug 04, 2022
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    Jan 11, 2025

    it's 3:25 am so no schizopost sorry

    or kinda but it's gonna be short
    very kool read I read it in one sitting while consuming two liters of milkshake

    I liked asta and caspian was interesting, sky was kool to a degree but kat just kind of existed sorry
    the concept is something I've seen plenty of times but I eat these kinds of settings up ngl the whole suffering for the greater good thing is so based especially when the ending isn't just 'pls dont make ppl suffer uwu' like these dumb fucks are gonna walk out to a nuclear wasteland LMAOO but it is what it is and tbh I feel like irl it'd happen the same way
    or at least I'd rather go that than know I live in fake luxury while someone is literally getting tortured (not that this doesn't happen already but it's more subtle because it's irl but it's ok because im not an apple user)

    it just kinda sucks that everything was so condensed
    the entire big reveal was just told in one short ass chapter and everything was way too easy for the main charas
    when she just let asta go with a slap on the wrist I was like LMAOO aint no way she's gonna get tortured and have a winston loved big brother moment but no, the spunky quirky band of misfit teenagers took down the evil government
    like I said before a lot of chapter transitions were insane and I'd be lost because one chapter ended so differently than how the other one began
    so what I'm saying is that if this story got decompressed a bit more it could be a banger but it is what it is, as is I like the 12 episode rushed anime adaptation

    very kool tho had fun it is now 3:31 am and the deadline for the contest is in two days so rip bozo @ self at least otk finished

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