Jun 16, 2023

A nice little break in the action. Ed really should have gone for the old sniff test before diving into those cookies 🍪 he would have caught the chili substitute immediately. It’s already pretty interesting to see how his Earthly memories are affecting the world around him.

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Jun 15, 2023

Another fantastic chapter, you’ve certainly got the wholesome romance and progression down. Claire gave them the little push they needed, and dipped. 🦅 Though, I’m wondering about how her own love life is… One thing I’ve noticed from this story is that every character has been likable in their own way, and I can definitely appreciate that.

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Jun 15, 2023

What an absolute UNIT of a chapter title if I do say so myself. 🥩 I can’t believe their first camping experience is gonna be in hotels instead of tents 🏕️

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Jun 15, 2023

Writes down note: “I will be silently shipping Rika and Hikaru going forward ✍️” Those two matchmakers are definitely working overtime on Akio’s behalf. This chapter was as sweet as the strawberry parfait. 🍓

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Jun 15, 2023

Oh no! Her father is going the Queen Veranda route and taking matters into his own hands 😭 poor Hayasaka. Also just a heads up you put “found” instead of “find” you a betrothed. Of all the perspective shifts I’ve read, this one just feels so natural (and necessary) to me. Safe to say I’m rooting for her now, because I can understand what motivates her.

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Jun 14, 2023

I sent my comment before I read the last couple lines, but I’m glad he went with the purple flowers. It shows that he has been paying attention to Emma. It seems we’ll learn more about her in the next installment. 😭

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Jun 14, 2023

My favorite character makes her triumphant return.. Miss Iwamoto I’ve missed you 💐 Congrats on overcoming the smut allegations, this chapter was very cute. You can’t go wrong with roses.

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Jun 14, 2023

We got the origin story of the clovers, and the beginning of Akio’s Ailurophobia ☘️ Cute chapter, and very sweet of Hikari to share his treats with the others.

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Jun 14, 2023

Kruaal — Cruel (I see what you did there 😁) It didn’t sound like the most fun life, but he did assemble a harem. So good for him. This chapter can sate the requirement for isekai by dealing with reincarnation, but I like that you did it in an entertaining way. It doesn’t feel thrown in, and it explains how his values remain similar between lives. Well done.

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Jun 14, 2023

We got a beach chapter 🏝️ (sort of) I am curious about the kid. On what grounds did Oliver suppose that he wasn’t human? I guess that confused me a bit, but a fun chapter!

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Jun 14, 2023

I love the comraderie between drummers 🥁 Just an instant connection. Music is the way to my heart and like the other entries that have dove into it, you have captured my attention. Nice first chapter!

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Jun 13, 2023

It’s really nice to see Keith overcome being so down on himself and Carlos being a good buddy to help him realize it 🏀 Most of all, it seems like Jessica left a huge impression on him. I look forward to seeing him climb up the rotation.

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Jun 13, 2023

I really like the developments in this chapter. You’re starting to get the wholesome romance aspect down, and Nao and Takashi are really cute. Even though they got thwarted by the umbrella gang at the end lol ☂️

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Jun 13, 2023

Og-dog with the self-awareness to apologize for mispeaking right away? 🏆 Gotta give him one of these. Felt a big jump in chemistry between them in this chapter, and it helped rekindle my love for bowling. Win/Win.

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Jun 13, 2023

The streets told me there was more 🅱️idgeon, so here I am. Does B-dog stand for “Bandit” because what is that song title??? 😭

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