Jun 21, 2023

Oh no! I hope the cats were alright 🐈‍⬛ But what are the odds that they run into that gate guard there?? She certainly had no reservations in tearing the place up.

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Jun 21, 2023

“Haha no” busted. 😂 Thank you Stefan for being the voice of reason that Stat-kun couldn’t be at first, 📊 but it looks like we’re finally going to get him an editing feature.

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Jun 21, 2023

We got the lap pillow 🙏 Haru got taken care of in reality, and his dreams. I like the idea of bringing a tune from Grace to the real world. I often have dreams where my mind makes up a melody, and I go record it in my voice recording app as soon as I wake up lol

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Jun 20, 2023

That last line really got me 😆 I agree with Pernodi, if he doesn’t find a way to cheat the goddesses system and fix those stats she’s not gonna hit her full potential. Side note: I really like John, and how he’s contributing to the world building with his dialogue. Great start to this story through three chapters.

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Jun 20, 2023

Me 🤝 Takashi
Kitsune
I was wondering how she got invited to spend time with the team suddenly, but you answered my question pretty quick. More cuteness between the leads (hand holding!! ❣️), and another good chapter.

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Jun 20, 2023

You had done such a fantastic job of establishing interpersonal relationships between the characters, and now we start to get some worldbuilding to compliment it. 🏡 Madam Claire sure didn’t hold back when he asked to be rich 😆💜 but it seems like his elf disposition might cause him some issues going forward, and what’s this about curses?? I can’t wait to find out in the next chapter.

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Jun 20, 2023

I can just imagine the awkwardness of bursting into her classroom 😭 I have my own theory of what’s going down… Mai is leaving love letters to “create work” for the club so their budget can be justified. (Although I would feel a little bad for Hatsumi-Chan 💌) Can’t wait to see more.

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Jun 20, 2023

I’ve been waiting for my break all morning for this one, and we finally get Haruhi taking that first step for Otaku-kind. 👩‍🚀 I don’t blame him for his nerves, I once dated a girl with a scary father and I expected it to go a bit like this. All things considered, Haruhi performed quite well in his role 🏅 but can Ichika step up to the plate now? Another entertaining chapter.

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Jun 20, 2023

It might not be Venice, but Indestria sounds pretty cool. It’s just a kitty cafe what’s the worst that could happen? 🐈‍⬛ The narrator: Everything, Actually. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Jun 19, 2023

Nao becoming Takashi’s biggest cheerleader 📣 and Takashi finally overcoming his demons to help his team win. You’re finding a great balance between a sports and romance story. Great chapter.

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Jun 19, 2023

I knew I’d heard of Takachiho somewhere before, I’m finally remembering where. I listen to a podcast and they talked about the Takachiho gorge, and the waterfall. 🌿 It’s a beautiful area, and seems like a nice setting for a story like this. Nao is a sweetheart too.

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Jun 19, 2023

“No, you’re just really bad.” 😂 Roasted by a deity, I like it. Also Kitsune mentioned, I feel seen. 👀

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Jun 19, 2023

The HUD actually sounds pretty cool with the minimap and everything. I think I would be too afraid to go into a town until I had trained myself up on some weak mobs. Lest I get griefed by a player immediately in town like when I used to play RDR1 online 😭

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Jun 19, 2023

into overload immediately** holy cow maybe my brain is in auto-pilot.

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Jun 19, 2023

I think you’ve really found your groove with these last couple chapters. In terms of narration and scenario-writing, this is your best chapter yet in this story. I could feel the agony of him getting aired for almost two days. My overthinking would have sent me info overload immensely, I think Og-dog handled it well. With only a pinch of denial.

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