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Jun 19, 2023

I think you’ve really found your groove with these last couple chapters. In terms of narration and scenario-writing, this is your best chapter yet in this story. I could feel the agony of him getting aired for almost two days. My overthinking would have sent me info overload immensely, I think Og-dog handled it well. With only a pinch of denial.

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:8

Jun 19, 2023

This chapter was just as adorable as the last (perhaps even more so), and Akio got the answer he was looking for. 😄 I’m wondering if he’ll have what it takes to volunteer, but it’ll help him get over his fears and double as more quality time with Yuki. 🐈 I’m rooting for you, Akio.

Ailurophobia

Chapter:6

Jun 18, 2023

Is that romantic development I spy?? 👀💘 Oliver’s dad seems like a pretty cool guy. It’s a shame they can’t stay there longer, but the inquisition seems to be devoted to finding Chiyo at any cost. It’s nice to see these two headed in the right direction though.

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:12

Jun 18, 2023

What a kind and thoughtful gesture for them to get something Ed would especially like 📚 Since they say “It’s the thought that counts” it counts a lot considering the prep time they had to put in to get it. I can’t help but wonder which of them (if indeed it’s them) will turn into the romantic interest if that’s the route you choose to go.

The Youngest Court Mystic And the Mischievous Twin Princesses

Chapter:5

Jun 18, 2023

Where were you when Haru and Grace engaged in the great stink wars of Chapter 7? We have a hot springs chapter! 🚿♨️

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:7

Jun 18, 2023

I think it’s safe to say that this was the best chapter yet. You have nice progression on the wholesome romance, and perhaps a little supernatural element at the end? 🦊

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:8

Jun 18, 2023

There’s something really funny about an overpowered cult of players paying respect to an amogus character, and even more so that Alice doesn’t want to mess with them. 😂 I have to give this chapter a 10/10 for the Steve Jobs-Ligma reference, it made me think of the Thanos version.

Maniavolution

Chapter:14

Jun 18, 2023

Really wasn’t expecting to feel emotional so early in the morning, but here I am 🥲 Also didn’t expect such a tender chapter with the title, but at least Alice can still crack s3x jokes. Just hope she’s ok.

Maniavolution

Chapter:12

Jun 18, 2023

Haru acting like a micro-celebrity, and Hayasaka acting like a mob boss all in one small outing 😆 The ‘meeting the parents’ event, she sure doesn’t play around. The Doki Doki reference is just the icing on the cake of a really entertaining chapter 🍰 but will he be able to talk-no-jutsu her dad…?

Love, Manga & Blackmail: A Secret Otaku's Countdown To Romance!

Chapter:4

Jun 17, 2023

I really love the writing style you’re going with in this first chapter. It’s really giving me major Hyouka vibes with how curious Ryota seems to be (and mention of mysteries ⁉️) I love it already.

The Whimsical Matchmaking Brigade

Chapter:2

Jun 17, 2023

He can count himself safe from that Miss Iwamoto @ss whooping… for now. 😆 Yeah Ace, playing video games… that’s also what I was thinking… 🎮 Nice drama there at the end to set up for what’s next.

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:9

Jun 17, 2023

I’m happy to finally be able to start this one. A sudden thing to spring on someone at the end, I wonder if our MC is the type to agree to something like taking in a runaway? I agree that playing with the space on the page by breaking up paragraphs would be a good idea. Overall a nice start, I like the imagery. 🚂

On the Railway Wire

Chapter:1

Jun 17, 2023

I like the solid mix of gang story mixed with the wholesome romance that you’re developing. I’ve read quite a few stories so far, but yours stands out as striking a really nice balance. It looks like the members of the group date found their own little romance too 💖

Pretty Boy Gangster

Chapter:8

Jun 17, 2023

Even if Shinji can’t fully be trusted, it’s true that he saved Akari and Ryochi in his own way. I do agree that they should tread carefully, but interested to see what he means by “get to know them better”. Is his end-game to try to recruit Akari into the Vipers? I’m looking forward to seeing what will happen going forward.

Pretty Boy Gangster

Chapter:7

Jun 17, 2023

We get a bunch of McWholesomeness 🍔 and a look at our main Mami at the end. I thought the reactions were all pretty cute, nice first chapter.

McMami

Chapter:1

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