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Novelist ✦ Singer and Producer ✦ Isekai Enthusiast ✦ 27/M
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Jun 10, 2023
To:Pearlyn.M
Hot, as all things should be.
Jun 09, 2023
We get the aftermath of the hospital visit in this chapter, and isekai is heavily implied 🌎 I did like the backstory portion, it was sweet.
Maaaaan poor Keith 😓 Guess he didn’t quite enough just yet. He needs his training arc.
> Scooby doo meme.
> Splitting up to look for clues.
That is just some peak referencing right there, my friend.
Is Patrick the Ayanokoji of their class? Nice set-up chapter, and I have to agree with Kaiden *bad feeling about this intensifies*
Congrats on the first post! I can just feeeel the awkwardness for poor Majima, but Mia still came in clutch at the end. 🤝
I can really sense a love for basketball in your writing. I’ve watched and enjoyed it for a long time too. I see that Sean is the Jordan of the team 👀
I see that you rearranged some material, and I think it has really benefitted your pacing. Also the world building you’ve got going on is great. It’s nice to see Chiyo and Oliver venture out now, great stuff. 👏
Money Miro and the Yungbloods 💸 Felt like a quick chapter, but we got a look at what I assume will be the heroine at the end.
As a former rapper myself, and a big rap fan this hits a certain box for me that I enjoy. On the shorter side, so I’ll wait for chapter 1. 🎵
The Grace route, hmm? 😏 These chapters always fly by when I read them, super enjoyable as usual.
Starting off with a bit of an emotional hook and a look into the psyche of Yuta. I also hope the maid succeeds in melting away his personal trouble, and we get to learn more about it.
Continuing where the last chapter left off. I just gotta say, I love Naruse’s personality. It’s pompous in the most hilarious way possible. Also that’s a quick end to his secret otaku identity 📸 glasses got him good! But will she spill the beans…?
“Distressed Ikemen Pose” I love it 😂 and I also quite enjoy how you introduce each character, and the natural sounding dialogue. In my head I picture time freezing and their name popping up on the screen like in an anime. How long can Naruse keep his Otaku secret? I’m interested to find out.
Nice chapter. We get a look into Ren a bit more in this chapter. I’m curious what the deal is with his upbringing.
