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Novelist ā¦ Singer and Producer ā¦ Isekai Enthusiast ā¦ 27/M
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Jun 06, 2023
As a tank main in pretty much every MMO I respect Jasonās tankiness and heās pretty nimble too? (!!) I agree with Alice, I like their chemistry too.
Your story has really gotten better with each chapter. It seems Naoki has a knack for getting his friends into trouble, but it sort of worked out for Akari.
I think Ryoichi is my favorite character so far. He reminds me of Mitsuyoshi from My Little Monster.
His special techniques are much too powerful for Emma at her current level. Perhaps, with practice sheāll be able to take the chin-lift and remain conscious. Only time will tellā¦
Some big foreshadowing with ādreams must endā thrown in there. If that is true, I hope that Haru will get as much joy as possible out of this experience. Theyāre cute together, so I hope they can find a way to transcend dreams.
I knew from the moment he started chatting away that he was going to scare the game. Hunting + noise ā Food. Heās a little spacey, and I feel a little bit bad for her. I would say sheās mastered the art of restraint, and I hope he starts to catch hints. Lest they go hungry š
I really enjoyed the heart-to-heart between Ogden and Anne-Marie. They have more in common than one might think (and Iām quite impressed she was willing to admit her Versace was fake š )
Jun 05, 2023
AI assistant-chan is my early candidate for best girl. š„ļø I think this achieves a lot for a prologue. You get a really solid idea of the main character, and their struggles. But you also presumably get to jump right in from chapter 1, very nice!
Classic Pip, leaving for all the work but coming back just in time to taunt Ayato. 10/10 trolling.
She got Ayato good with that chick pun. š£ He should have known better, this is no ecchi!
Really solid start! I like your writing style, everything flows incredibly well. Itās fine for Yan to apply some of his romance expertise.
I almost went to Hirosaki park during my trip to Japan a couple weeks ago, but I couldnāt make it to Aomori. Perhaps next time šø You did a good job of explaining how heād get back in unnoticed.
The framing for this one is so so good. It might just be the big part of me that relates to his situation, but it was an emotional read. Itās really easy to get into your own head like that, especially when youāre crowd anxious. You got something cooking.
To:Kya Hon
Rie Takahashi had it right when she encouraged deodorant. Life saving stuff.
This is almost a 1:1 of my first couple convention experiences from the 2nd guessing wearing a cosplay outside the CC, and the heinous line forming inside. Perhaps the most relatable, showing up by myself with thousands of others and wanting to go home lol
Camden asking the real questions? āIs this doxxing?ā YES it is š The plot thickens with Patrickās hint/privacy breach. I hope things donāt work out too badly for Astellaā¦
