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Taylor J

Hello! My name is Taylor! I am a writer and artist. One day I want to work in the video game and light novel industry and make epic stories for all of you to enjoy!

My aim is to improve a little bit every day, so please feel free to critique my work as much as you’d like! (I can take it)
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Current Novels :
1. The Pill That Killed Romance (hiatus until after MALxHF)
2. Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel
3. Control My Life!

Upcoming Novels :

1. Apocalypse Punk Pt. 2

registered at: Feb 05, 2023

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Nov 04, 2025

Gideon needs to mithril stick just to be extra. 😂

Time and Time Again

Chapter:13

Nov 04, 2025

take a good long rest, sloane, you've finally earned it. 😪

Error Code 404: My Class Is Corrupted, so I’m Breaking All the Rules

Chapter:31

Nov 04, 2025

I'm hoping Salone going forward will have more confidence in himself! He's more special than he realizes!

Error Code 404: My Class Is Corrupted, so I’m Breaking All the Rules

Chapter:30

Nov 04, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Funny enough, I noticed he was on the cover just today.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:28

Nov 04, 2025

DaVinci is so pure he thought the wig was a spell! 😂 Gotta' be one of my favourite characters you've written, Mario. He's a champ.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:28

Nov 04, 2025

Gotta' give Rosa's mom credit. She really did Rosa a solid with that one, considering all the pain she'd gone through.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:27

Nov 03, 2025

To:TheLeanna_M

Let's just hope she doesn't end up looking like a jigsaw puzzle with a couple of pieces gone.

Face of Eternity : Harrowing Halloween

Chapter:8

Nov 03, 2025

Sloane's the kinda' guy who just wants the simple life. All he needs is an orange in his hand, a tree to talk to, and he's happy.

Error Code 404: My Class Is Corrupted, so I’m Breaking All the Rules

Chapter:29

Nov 03, 2025

To:SkeletonIdiot

BRO YES! Portillo's is great!

Control My Life!

Chapter:38

Nov 03, 2025

The idea of imprisonment, but existence, vs. death, but completion, feels good here. Good in the sense that it fits narratively and objectively. It honestly reminds me of a lot of the drafts of stories I have locked away in my computer. Like, I never intend to finish them, but I'm not the type to delete them either because I don't want them to be forgotten forever. When do we let go of them, if ever? What happens when the computer breaks down and nobody can ever find those stories again? It's a melancholy thought.

The Last Revision

Chapter:13

Nov 03, 2025

Alright I made it to the end! This chapter was fun, Katsu!

So the next arc takes place in the sea! of course Rokuro and Kagi immediately get in trouble when they arrive lol (A theme of the whole contest if you ask me 😂) As always, the setting is so vivid and strong! That really has been the strong suit of this story. You really do a great job giving details and making the place feel lived in. I'm really loving the idea that they go from place to place, practically new worlds each time hunting for a particularly slippery villain. Each new region kinda feels like a flavour of the week, which is cool.

Kagi and Rokuro were a very cute combo btw. I think there's more they can do to grow their bond/relationship, and I think that the previous arc did a good job bringing them together. But I'm really hoping for more! I want their ship to sail far and strong!

I kinda' agree with Mario that the cliffhanger does push the bounds of the satisfying ending requirement, but I can honestly see this as the type of epilogue that just teases something silly that just shows that the characters are still alive and well after the story ends. I'm not sure how to articulate my point, but it's like a goofy after credits scene that may or may not come to tease its own movie. I'd have to read the chapter again to see if that idea sticks with me, but that's just my surface thoughts.

Overall, a good read! I'll be working on a proper review soon, so look forward to it!

Lock & Key: Resonance

Chapter:39

Nov 03, 2025

SANA SURVIVED!

For what it's worth I still think Rokuro has an awesome jacket 😂

Goodbye, everyone! 👋 They were all really great and I felt like every character was fleshed out nicely. Like, I know a lot of our stories get cut down to single arcs to finish the contests on time, but this one was so detailed and strong that I really hope for more! I'm actually a little sad that I'm coming up on the last chapter soon lol

Lock & Key: Resonance

Chapter:38

Nov 03, 2025

"I've been through worse" he says after losing an arm lol Vengeance must have been sweet.

I love the concept of resonance in a story. I even recently introduced it in a story of mine! It's such an awesome thing in fantasy.

Lock & Key: Resonance

Chapter:37

Nov 03, 2025

Started strong with the smack talk! That's half the fun of battle! Solon and Lykos are really showing their ire for each other.

THAT WAS RAW, LYKOS! Traded his arm for the W. Man deserves a solute. 🫡

He got away... 😭 But I think he'll get his, I can feel it!

Lock & Key: Resonance

Chapter:36

Nov 03, 2025

So one on one. Lykos vs. Solon. It only seems right, no matter the advantage they'd have if they all fought together. There's just some things a man's gotta do alone. 🫡

The rebels are fighting hard, but they knew what they were getting into. This is where it counts.

YEAH LAMI!!!! 🔥Now the shoe is on the other foot!

Can't wait for Draven to get dunked on... GIVE HIM A GOOD PUNCH BRO!!!

Lock & Key: Resonance

Chapter:35

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