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I've decided that now is the time to write my first story. Above all, let's have fun on this journey!

registered at: Jun 02, 2023

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Jun 06, 2023

This is quickly shaping up to be one of my favorite contest novels, keep it up!
I see you made a small typo when writing "the feeling of standing of the precipice".

What we Dream

Chapter:3

Jun 06, 2023

It was all a dream~

What we Dream

Chapter:2

Jun 06, 2023

That must've been the luckiest shot of Takashi's life.

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:3

Jun 06, 2023

You have a way of writing that really puts me in the middle of the story. Good work so far!

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:2

Jun 06, 2023

Poor Takuya, sensei shouldn't be abusing his students like that!

When the Air was Filled with Petrichor

Chapter:2

Jun 06, 2023

He didn't get the spot he wanted... Looks like he still has a long way to go.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:6

Jun 06, 2023

A fateful encounter indeed. This is immediately getting flirty 👀

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:3

Jun 06, 2023

Don't sleep through classes mister MC, your education is important!

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:1

Jun 06, 2023

To:Lucky Lane

Thank you! I've been doing my best to make an easy read, so I'm glad you felt that way.

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:1

Jun 06, 2023

To:otkrlj

I'll definitely keep that in mind going forward, and rework these earlier chapters a bit when I finish the first arc. Thank you for the feedback!

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:6

Jun 05, 2023

To:Kitsune

It's a shame you couldn't make it to Aomori, I'm enchanted by that prefecture. I'm planning a trip to Japan for next year and Aomori is definitely high on my to-do list.

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:6

Jun 05, 2023

Those final few paragraphs really made me feel the tension in the air.

Enchanted by a Witch From a Realm Called Earth

Chapter:2

Jun 04, 2023

You clearly know how to write, everything seemed to flow so effortlessly. There's some funny stuff in here, and I can easily visualise the descriptions. Strong start!

Can You Read Me?

Chapter:1

Jun 04, 2023

I already like the girl, sounds like an interesting character.

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:4

Jun 04, 2023

To:A. Hoshino

If the town is relevant for future chapters then it's fine to explore it a bit more in-depth. By the way, are you in the honeyfeed discord yet? There's a channel specifically to chat about the contest. If you want to trade reads with people and get some pointers, it's the place to be!

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:2

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