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I've decided that now is the time to write my first story. Above all, let's have fun on this journey!
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Jun 03, 2023
To:kazesenken
All will become clear in due time~
This is going in a nice direction~
A v-tuber's identity being leaked is a really creative premise. I'm also curious as to how you'll explore the whole parasocial relationship thing. This is interesting!
To:otkrlj
That's really nice of you! I hope I can keep entertaining you with my writing.
Your style of writing immediately pulled me into the story. A hospital is a pretty unique setting with a lot of possibilites to explore, isn't it? This one is going into my library, good job on this first chapter!
To:Deleted User
Thanks for the feedback! I don't want to exposition dump since I don't like that in novels, so I'm doing my best to make the exposition flow as naturally as possible. It's a game of balancing out everything that doesn't always work out smoothly. The next chapter is finished already so it should be up tomorrow, I'll try to do either a daily or bi-daily release schedule.
This is one of the best opening chapters I've read so far! The prose and pacing are on point.
To:Steward McOy
What a happy coincidence! Let's both do our best in the coming months.
Jun 02, 2023
To:Aeolian
Thank you for the kind words! I wasn't sure about using a De Goya painting as the cover for an anime-inspired contest, but if enough people like it I might just keep it this way.
Your prose is very enjoyable to read and you employ a wide lexicon, keep it up! I can hardly believe that this is your first time writing a story. I'm curious to see where this goes.
