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Literally Hikigaya Hachiman from the hit TV Anime “My Youth Romantic Comedy Is Wrong, As I Expected” starring Hikigaya Hachiman

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Mar 24, 2025

To:Lihinel

A very loyal one too

Of Love and Liberation - to change þis rotten world wiþ þee [volume 1]

Chapter:6

Mar 23, 2025

Also if the romance feels unnatural or forced, I'm sorry, there's just little I can do about that. I don't really understand love or romance but I'm trying to figure it out as I go

Of Love and Liberation - to change þis rotten world wiþ þee [volume 1]

Chapter:39

Mar 23, 2025

God I wish that were me

Of Love and Liberation - to change þis rotten world wiþ þee [volume 1]

Chapter:38

Mar 23, 2025

The slow progress in this relationship was even starting to piss *me* off a little so this chapter felt like crack cocaine to write

Of Love and Liberation - to change þis rotten world wiþ þee [volume 1]

Chapter:37

Mar 23, 2025

To:obliviousbushtit

Very strong start, but I think it's started to lose steam in the swampy middle. It kinda feels like you had a concrete plan up to chapter 16 then started to lose it a bit from there. Can't put my finger on exactly what I mean, but I think it's 17 and onwards where I started to notice it. Maybe a bit later like ~20ish. The chapters have since started to feel more disjointed and meander-y in a way, I guess? I dunno, I'm kinda the worst person to give feedback. And also a massive hypocrite cos I also lost steam and completely hit the ground running so you're doing better than me lol

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:23

Mar 23, 2025

To:bxnwin

I think my only problem with that line is that the word "troglodyte" doesn't really sound like something my mental image of Chloe would say even if she is comfortable with him. This may just be me building up the wrong impression of her but I feel like it's the sort of thing either of the other girls would be more likely to say than her, and that she'd be more likely to use a simpler and less harsh insult.

Again tho, this is just because of the way I think of her as a character, this could be just as much me misreading as you writing out of character

Hanging by a Thread

Chapter:26

Mar 23, 2025

Aquarium date? Absolutely peak, that's an S-tier romance anime trope for sure. Though the last time I saw an aquarium date with multiple girls was OreGairu and that ended... poorly, to say the least.

I can't even joke and call Aikami a pussy for this one, in that situation I think I'd have a heart attack on the spot and die. I mean Alice getting so close to my face, not the talking fish thing, that'd be far easier to take in stride

Between him missing the girls so badly last chapter and being so taken with Alice this chapter, I have a feeling his request is gonna be something like "stay with me on Earth" and he's gonna ask it of all three of them, he's become too dependent on them for happiness to just let them go now

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Chapter:27

Mar 23, 2025

Falling for three girls at the same time? What an absolute man whore, he should trade places with me.

"Vitamin-deficient troglodyte" caught me way off guard, did not expect that from Chloe of all people lol

Hanging by a Thread

Chapter:26

Mar 22, 2025

That whole bit on the middle is just him talking, right? Why constantly close and reopen quotation marks every sentence? Makes it really hard to tell of the speaker is switching or not.

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:23

Mar 22, 2025

Another short one to break up a long chapter, I'm afraid.
This story is making my search history look deluded. Had to look up "middle english word for lesbian" yesterday

Of Love and Liberation - to change þis rotten world wiþ þee [volume 1]

Chapter:35

Mar 22, 2025

⛵️ has sailed, they even said the g and b words, that was fast. I’m not complaining tho, their dynamic is already great

Poor Lacy, no match for the power of cat ears. Imagine being the literal only woman to tolerate this man for presumably years and *still* losing the Rio-bowl. Sucks to suck, I’m afraid

Brushstrokes and Silver Blades

Chapter:11

Mar 21, 2025

>Self admitted pathetic coward
>Such a mess that a literal demon calls her unhinged
>Either can’t speak at all or rambles in big run on sentences

Getting real tired of these author self insert protagonists

if the moon forgets to smile

Chapter:13

Mar 21, 2025

To:bxnwin

Yeah, I won’t pretend to be an expert on Greek mythology (I only knew Clotho, Lachesis and Atropos because of the MegaTen franchise) but from what I do know I at least somewhat expected that she was hinting at something that would get this story age gated lmao

Also I’m surprised I haven’t mentioned this before now, but by sheer coincidence the main love interest in my story is *also* called Alice lol

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Chapter:25

Mar 21, 2025

To:bxnwin

That's a "quick sketch?" It's really damn good, I could tell which character was which literally at a quick glance because their body language reflects their personalities perfectly. The details and shading are great too, it looks like much more than just a rough sketch.
Damned talented people and being better than me at things.

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Chapter:24

Mar 21, 2025

It's exactly as I said 11 chapters ago, the girls would rather Aikami treat them as people but he keeps treating them as goddesses instead. Of course I would also treat Alice like a goddess but for a completely different reason (okay I swear I'll tone down the simping a little lol)

I have always wondered tho, what are you *actually* supposed to ask for with these whole "you can request one thing from me" bets? A date? A kiss? A titty peek? It feels like there's a certain level of expectation, but also like asking for almost anything crosses some sort of line. It'd be funny to just call Aikami a pussy and move on, but I feel like I'd just hand wave it away too. It's an anime trope that I always thought was a tad strange

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Chapter:25

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