Sep 04, 2023
I finally have some time to drop by other novels! 😁 So I wanted to check out your story!!
Immediately getting some scifi or futuristic dystopia vibes here? Which is a very fun and different approach to the Isekai prompt! Loving the descriptions of the derelict city so far.
And then...the city falls to darkness~ Explosions and invading forces? Ooh we're going full intrigue here 🤩 and the Wheelers are cool too! The combo of high-tech robots mixed with low-tech typewriters really gives this a post-apocalyptic feeling, like all this tech might have been scrounged together from whatever was left!
The Red Barbarian is attacking?? And she's...a young woman? 😲 Oooh! I am still not quite certain what we are fighting over here but I am certainly intrigued!
(Though I will say...don't use a gasoline generator indoors, ever, please!! 🙏🙏🙏 I have actual family members who have died because of carbon monoxide poisoning from gasoline generators and it is incredibly dangerous. Generators should only ever be used outside, and especially never used in apartments or in enclosed areas! I realize this is a fantasy story, but I must post this anytime I see generators used indoors in media, because it is misinformation that leads to generator-related accidents. ...Okay, that is my IRL generator rant finished 🤣 my apologies.)
Maybe he and Mia really are better off just as friends~
This was meant to be the peak of happiness and fun, a moment where all the couples start to come together, and feelings of love are in the magical air with a fun night~ ❤️ (but of course, there's still more story left 😉 so you know this is a bit of a pivotal point too!!)
