Sep 04, 2023
It's a big accomplishment to see a story through to the end and close it out completed 👏 so hold onto that victory 100% and don't let any inner critic try to take that from you!! (I say this from my own experience 🤣 my inner critic is always trying to tell me what I could've done, should've done, it never stops! 😅 even after my story is finished.)
"It's a very flawed story, but, here at the end, I can say I'm proud of it still." -- this is a really powerful line, and I'm trying to embrace that kind of thought process myself about a lot of the things I do!!
I could give some feedback about the strengths/weaknesses in your story, but I think you may already know a lot of that yourself, and I'd rather send encouragement rather than fuel the inner critic (if that makes sense!) So I'd only provide feedback if you wanted it. If you're pretty comfortable where this story is now, and would rather look forward to future projects than look back at this, that makes perfect sense.
I was happy to read and I enjoyed a lot about this narrative!! 
I see a lot of potential here with your writing, and of course, as a person who writes wordy comments too...trust me, I know the struggle of creating short replies 🤣 (trying not to go too long here so I don't make this an epic comment chain!) Thank you for supporting LS ❤️ and for being awesome!
