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Jul 26, 2023

A battle of emotion versus reason, and memories of a girl... remnants from before a brain surgery!! :O oooh~

From the Depths of an Emotionless Heart

Chapter:0

Jul 26, 2023

To:Napryzon

Thank you so much for checking it out!!! :D the intro is quick but I hope it can draw people in and let you know this won't quite be the normal isekai~ 😆

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:1

Jul 26, 2023

To:kazesenken

you see my future plot ideas 👀 jun and claire would be a great duo jumping between worlds, acting as fate-cupids ❤️

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:25

Jul 26, 2023

To:Deleted User

This was actually one of my favorite chapters, even though I know it was mostly talking 🤩 I just loved the chance to explore their characters and show them trying their best to overcome their emotions <33

Toren though 😭 my booooy 💔

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:19

Jul 26, 2023

To:hmt5u

Honestly I love putting in ridiculous comedy when I can 🤣 I'd like to think that somewhere out there, the NPC-version of Jun is just pathfinding into trucks and getting further isekai'd into other worlds.

More secrets and drama are hidden under the surface here 😉 which will slowly start to reveal these next few chapters!!

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:4

Jul 26, 2023

To:kagaroma

Happy to comment!! :D I think your writing has been lovely so far and I feel like more is yet to come! 😆 you've chosen a very challenging theme of grief, loss, and finding life direction. That can be a difficult road as a writer with some sensitive themes, which is mostly where my reservations lie, but I shall wait to see how you handle this!! 🤩 I'm more the type to offer support than critique, just because I know how hard writing can already be (on top of everything else in life 😣) but with topics of mental health I do try to speak up a bit! Because they're very important to me ❤️

*Color* me interested for the next few chapters! Maybe Shiro and this girl will be *drawn* to each other? Their conversations might not be for the faint of *art*! 👀 ...okay I'll stop 🤣

Monochrome Rainbow

Chapter:3

Jul 26, 2023

To:Memo Alfonso

Can't keep Toren away for long!!

The fight scene was admittedly to help keep this chapter from being entirely dialogue, and to show that Toren is a little simple-minded about his problem solving skills. (Have a problem? Just punch it!) But Toren will change about that 👀 especially once he meets Mia!! (And spends some time with Roki 🤣)

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:15

Jul 25, 2023

A sister appears!!! One of nine! 😲 The beautiful Mond-chan!

Somehow, Charlie and Mond have a similar way with their insults 🤣 I'd love to see them have a Shakespearian-style rap battle.

Charlie's master is the thief? Ooh that explains the teleporting! But oh dear 😨 Mond picked him as her potential suitor?? Well, I guess she never intended to take it seriously, she just wanted to use his teleport magic.

Well this will sure put a hamper in things! But if the statue puzzles are like they've been, I don't think Mond and Master-san have a chance at proving their "love" 🤭

Also hey I'm caught up!! This has been really fun so far ❤️ I enjoy how light and fun it is, and the chapters are just really nice to read!

Full Moon! Through the Rings of Love

Chapter:23

Jul 25, 2023

Larry, Curly, and Moe 🤣🤣 I wasn't expecting a three stooges reference on HoneyFeed!! But there it is! The brilliant golden trio of birds! But aww they have to leave them behind for now! Hoping the birds will catch up.

Onto the ring of...contraptions? :D with low gravity and a platform puzzle, I'm feeling Mario Galaxy vibes!!

Full Moon! Through the Rings of Love

Chapter:21

Jul 25, 2023

I'm somehow...kind of glad the birds don't have to spill out their feelings for this trail 🤣

Awww Zumi hasn't spoken yet though, that's right!! Zumi chapter!? Maybe? :D I want to know more about her!
Hmm so she mostly spent time trying to help her brother, while her brother also spent time trying to help her... 😭 I wonder what these siblings would be like if they focused only on themselves for a change? Would they be lost for awhile? Probably. Might they find something new about themselves? Perhaps so~

But they could talked things out and reaffirmed their feelings!! And the gate approves 😉

Full Moon! Through the Rings of Love

Chapter:20

Jul 25, 2023

Oooh so the goal isn't just to get a husband...but to find the potential next Lunar Emporer 😭 and the spirit bond plays a big part in that!! And Luna wants to be the empress because her sisters might mistreat humans :(( that's such a big burden on her!
But I'm not so sure Walden wants to become a ruler? But maybe that problem is for a later chapter 🤣

I'm glad they're getting closer!! Their loves might still be slightly different, but I could see them slowly coming around to understand each other with time ~

Full Moon! Through the Rings of Love

Chapter:19

Jul 25, 2023

To:seanyori

Oooh I can't say yet~ Behind the ikemen or cute act...I feel like I prefer when Akari can truly be himself. When he forgets about the gang, forgets about being cool, lets go of the structures of his life and just...is himself 💕 We've seen a few glimpses of that in both this version and the previous (mostly when he's with Ayano ❤️) but I look forward to seeing it more. When he genuinely smiles, Akari totally steals my heart 🥰 (though I know he's spoken for!! 😆)

Pretty Boy Gangster

Chapter:26

Jul 25, 2023

To:seanyori

Nooo your romance writing game is awesome!!! Seriously I ship them now more than ever 😆 !

Pretty Boy Gangster

Chapter:25

Jul 25, 2023

Ooh the father better not dismantle our wonderful Robot!! I want to find out more about Chief-san 😭
(Also really curious how you envision the robot's appearance! Especially since everyone calls it "pretty" but also broken and falling apart)

Hmm Gua and her dad definitely aren't quite human, are they? 🤔 But at least the dad still reacts to flashing light attack!! 😂 Disco Diversion go!! 🪩

Silent dustbin? Aww heck nah, Chief-san's sarcasm cannot be contained!

Curious now about the magic, and also this species of being that Gua and her father are, and also the outside world! Fantasy and sci-fi elements together <333 so far this seems really cool!!

Re;built in another world

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2023

Post-apocalyptic, philosophical, and robots??? Oooh? :D (my inner Casshern:Sins fan is excited!!!)

I love the inner dialogue, and the interludes to show the programming. "Please continue conversing for the betterment of mankind" is such a line with so much world-building implications, and plus, I think I just really like that sentence ❤️

"They're going to blow me up with black powder because I spoke in some demonic tongue. Woe is me [sigh] I knew I should have gone for the combat module instead" 🤣🤣 oh no the sarcasm, I...I kind of love this sarcastic robot already.

And it cut itself off to deliberately reduce its own overthink module?? That was a really slick writing move there. Great way to refocus on the scene at hand!! (I also wish to reduce my overthink module by 50% 😆 all the time.)

...Sky Butthole ⊙ワ⊙ ;; help. I think I spat out my drink. I am so curious where you'll take this next! One more chapter let's goooooo

Re;built in another world

Chapter:0

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