Jul 26, 2023

To:Christian Widjaya

Yes!! Some people plan more, some people write right before posting! It has been really exciting to learn everyone's different styles! Usually I write with "no plan" but with a LOT of editing. Since I knew editing would be confusing for readers, I tried to plan out more of the events for Love Sorceress 😆

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Jul 26, 2023

To:Katsuhito

Reference away, my friend!! 👀 Your references make my day ❤️ glad I could share back some of that laughter!!! 😆

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Jul 26, 2023

Oooh Ami POV!!! Considering how awesome of a character she is, I'm happy to see more of her! She's still standing strong and focusing on the real important thing: they need to band together and not turn on each other (･ัᗜ･ั)و

Tenka glaring at her though 😭 bruh. Nooo. Ami is the best.

Ami is also...the hero!!!!
Wait. 🤔
Does that mean...she'll be Selina's #1 enemy?! Oh noooo 😱

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Jul 26, 2023

To:IceDonut

I must admit...my writing planning is almost zero 😂 I made basic notes like this:
* Jun & girlfriend break up.
* Claire brings Jun to another world
* Jun meets parallel ex
* They go on a date but it fails. Claire offers advice. They try again and it goes better
* Hint at Claire backstory??
* Childhood friend rival arc

...those are my real notes 😭 everything else I figure out as I write. As you can see, the whole "trees being poisoned" mystery wasn't even in the plan. That unfolded naturally from the events!

However, that said, I have studied the classics of the Hero's Journey. I also had a "beginning - middle - end" planned (that I can't post here because spoilers 👀) So although I did not directly plan for these things, the structure is there in my mind!! I will admit to being a more intuitive writer than a structured one (which has both its strengths and weaknesses.)

Brother-zone is indeed a part of friend-zone (sometimes considered *worse* than friend zone 🤣) It is Toren's final boss!! If this was a JRPG he would try to fight it with his fists! 👊

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Jul 26, 2023

Ahhh that's the favor! He asked Toyo for Suma's mom's number!! 😆

Kazuo starting to show that he has a cute side ❤️ thinking about Suma like that!!

Ooooh but he admitted he "wouldn't do that for anyone" to Suma. Isn't that almost a love confession? 😉

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Jul 26, 2023

Suma teasing him? 🤭 I like it!! The fake spider would scare me too, but it seems like good fun!

Manga Medium? He's never been there, but maybe he chose it for Suma? 🤩 Because she likes manga!

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Jul 26, 2023

A battle of emotion versus reason, and memories of a girl... remnants from before a brain surgery!! :O oooh~

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Jul 26, 2023

To:Napryzon

Thank you so much for checking it out!!! :D the intro is quick but I hope it can draw people in and let you know this won't quite be the normal isekai~ 😆

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Jul 26, 2023

To:kazesenken

you see my future plot ideas 👀 jun and claire would be a great duo jumping between worlds, acting as fate-cupids ❤️

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Jul 26, 2023

To:Deleted User

This was actually one of my favorite chapters, even though I know it was mostly talking 🤩 I just loved the chance to explore their characters and show them trying their best to overcome their emotions <33

Toren though 😭 my booooy 💔

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Jul 26, 2023

To:hmt5u

Honestly I love putting in ridiculous comedy when I can 🤣 I'd like to think that somewhere out there, the NPC-version of Jun is just pathfinding into trucks and getting further isekai'd into other worlds.

More secrets and drama are hidden under the surface here 😉 which will slowly start to reveal these next few chapters!!

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Jul 26, 2023

To:kagaroma

Happy to comment!! :D I think your writing has been lovely so far and I feel like more is yet to come! 😆 you've chosen a very challenging theme of grief, loss, and finding life direction. That can be a difficult road as a writer with some sensitive themes, which is mostly where my reservations lie, but I shall wait to see how you handle this!! 🤩 I'm more the type to offer support than critique, just because I know how hard writing can already be (on top of everything else in life 😣) but with topics of mental health I do try to speak up a bit! Because they're very important to me ❤️

*Color* me interested for the next few chapters! Maybe Shiro and this girl will be *drawn* to each other? Their conversations might not be for the faint of *art*! 👀 ...okay I'll stop 🤣

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Jul 26, 2023

To:Memo Alfonso

Can't keep Toren away for long!!

The fight scene was admittedly to help keep this chapter from being entirely dialogue, and to show that Toren is a little simple-minded about his problem solving skills. (Have a problem? Just punch it!) But Toren will change about that 👀 especially once he meets Mia!! (And spends some time with Roki 🤣)

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Jul 25, 2023

A sister appears!!! One of nine! 😲 The beautiful Mond-chan!

Somehow, Charlie and Mond have a similar way with their insults 🤣 I'd love to see them have a Shakespearian-style rap battle.

Charlie's master is the thief? Ooh that explains the teleporting! But oh dear 😨 Mond picked him as her potential suitor?? Well, I guess she never intended to take it seriously, she just wanted to use his teleport magic.

Well this will sure put a hamper in things! But if the statue puzzles are like they've been, I don't think Mond and Master-san have a chance at proving their "love" 🤭

Also hey I'm caught up!! This has been really fun so far ❤️ I enjoy how light and fun it is, and the chapters are just really nice to read!

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Jul 25, 2023

Larry, Curly, and Moe 🤣🤣 I wasn't expecting a three stooges reference on HoneyFeed!! But there it is! The brilliant golden trio of birds! But aww they have to leave them behind for now! Hoping the birds will catch up.

Onto the ring of...contraptions? :D with low gravity and a platform puzzle, I'm feeling Mario Galaxy vibes!!

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