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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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May 04, 2025

Hmm, I'm mixed on the format for these past two chapters. I get the angle you're going for with the action, but I feel it's all... too rapid? All the pagebreaks and short sentences I feel have more of a detracting effect than an enhancing one.

Black & White: Spirits, Love, and Traditions

Chapter:12

May 04, 2025

I'm glad Barry's thoughts are at least easy to understand. To be honest, reading his thoughts often times makes me forget about how hard it can be to understand him when he's talking.

Of Love and Liberation - to change þis rotten world wiþ þee [volume 1]

Chapter:16

May 04, 2025

It's already hard enough trying to have my brain remember þ = th whenever I start reading this again, but having to try and understand what Barry is saying only makes things more stressful.

Of Love and Liberation - to change þis rotten world wiþ þee [volume 1]

Chapter:15

May 04, 2025

Now that's A LOT of dialogue. Kind of mixed on how I feel about it as while I get it's all for the sake of character development, reading it all can be a bit overwhelming.

Zombie Virus Maker

Chapter:3

May 04, 2025

I saw this on May 4th, so I gotta say... Noooooooooo! Meming aside, I get where you're coming from. Burnout can be a real bitch, especially when there's a deadline. Both for stories I've submitted to contests and ones that I didn't, I've suffered my fair share of burnout. I know that rushing things for the sake of getting things out on time can really degrade the quality of things. Heck, I can pinpoint many strings of chapters in EPGM where that's the case. The fact that you're deciding to forgo the contest in favor of the quality of the story is admirable and worthy of praise.

But now that you're officially bowing out, allow me to discuss something I've been meaning to discuss about the story for a while; that being that I felt at times it wasn't sticking well to the contest prompt. Even though you wove it into the plot, the story honestly didn't feel like a "The end is now" type of story. In fact, I feel it was a stronger contender for the "Love transcends boundaries" category at times. Those thoughts aside, I look forward to when this story will continue. Take your time and upload at your own pace.

Evermark: A Promise Beyond The End

Chapter:22

May 04, 2025

Really a fan of the meta direction for the story. It really is relatable. The parody of the common spam comments is easily the icing on the cake. Speaking of which, my non-existent Deviantart account is seeking commissions and would love for you to commission it some art. Just sent a lump sum of gold to the Patreon of one Bosco the gold trading monkey, and we can talk business. Hope that at least got a laugh out of you.

My Personal Warrior

Chapter:13

May 04, 2025

Wow, this got really meta, and I love it.

My Personal Warrior

Chapter:12

May 04, 2025

The C4 clay joke was hilarious. Also, I can hear the Dandadan intro playing as everyone gets sucked into the UFO.

Sucky Apocalypse

Chapter:14

May 03, 2025

To:Taylor J

Wacky Races was a heavy inspiration for this arc. Heck, Dick and Mumbles are parodies of Dick Dastardly and Muttley, though ironically enough, Dick's the dog and Mumbles is the human.

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:25

May 02, 2025

[Game log #53]

Here's the game featured in Chapter 91 between Okisato and Michiko. It's easily my favorite game in the series and not only features a Sicilian Defense: King David's Opening, but also an en passant.

[Event "N/A"]
[Site "Tochigi City, Tochigi"]
[Date "2024.08.15"]
[Round "N/A"]
[White "Okisato Tanabe (2525)"]
[Black "SPCM Himitsuchan (Michiko Azami) (2144)"]
[Result "1-0"]

1. e4 c5 2. Ke2 Nc6 3. d3 Nf6 4. Nf3 d5 5. e5 Ng4 6. d4 cxd4 7. Nxd4 Qc7 8. f4 Ngxe5 9. Ke1 Ng6 10. Nc3 Nxf4 11. g3 Ne6 12. Nb3 d4 13. Nb5 Qe5+ 14. Qe2 f6 15. c3 d3 16. Qxe5 Nxe5 17. N3d4 Nxd4 18. cxd4 Nf3+ 19. Kf2 d2 20. Bg2 dxc1=Q 21. Rhxc1 Nxd4 22. Nc7+ Kd8 23. Nxa8 e5 24. Nc7 h5 25. h4 b6 26. Nd5 Be6 27. Rc4 g5 28. Rh1 Bc5 29. b4 Bd6 30. a4 Rf8 31. Rhc1 g4 32. Rd1 Rf7 33. Rc3 f5 34. Bh1 f4 35. Nxf4 exf4 36. Rxd4 fxg3+ 37. Kg1 Rd7 38. Kf1 Rf7+ 39. Kg1 Rd7 40. Re3 Bf7 41. Bc6 Rc7 42. Rxd6+ Kc8 43. b5 Kb8 44. Rd8+ Rc8 45. Rd7 Rc7 46. Rxc7 Kxc7 47. Re7+ Kd6 48. Rxf7 a5 49. bxa6 Kxc6 50. a7 Kd5 51. a8=Q+ Kd4 52. Rd7+ Kc3 53. Qe4 Kb2 54. Rd3 g2 55. Qe2+ Ka1 56. Rd1# 1-0

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:91

May 02, 2025

[Game log #52]

Here's the game between Mimoko and Ai that took place in Chapters 88 and 89. While Ai doesn't have a proper rating, her skill-level is that of a 3000-rated maestro.

[Event "Fight against Ai"]
[Site "Tochigi City, Tochigi"]
[Date "2024.08.14"]
[Round "4"]
[White "Mimoko Inoue (2714)"]
[Black "Ai Kamuro"]
[Result "1-0"]

1. e4 c6 2. d4 d5 3. Nc3 dxe4 4. Nxe4 Nf6 5. Nxf6+ gxf6 6. Nf3 Rg8 7. Qd3 Qd5 8. Qxh7 Rg6 9. Be3 Rg7 10. Qh8 Nd7 11. Nd2 f5 12. Qh5 Nf6 13. Qf3 Be6 14. c4 Qa5 15. a3 Rd8 16. O-O-O Qa4 17. h4 b5 18. Qxc6+ Bd7 19. Qb7 Rc8 20. c5 f4 21. Bxf4 Qxd4 22. Be3 Rxc5+ 23. Kb1 Qd5 24. Qxd5 Rxd5 25. Bxa7 Bf5+ 26. Ka2 Rg6 27. h5 Rg8 28. Be2 Bh6 29. Nb3 Rxd1 30. Rxd1 Rxg2 31. Bxb5+ Kf8 32. a4 Be6 33. Rd8+ Kg7 34. Ka3 Bf4 35. Nd4 Bg4 36. Bb6 Rg1 37. Ka2 Rh1 38. a5 e5 39. Be2 Bd7 40. a6 exd4 41. Rxd7 Re1 42. Rd8 Rxe2 43. a7 Re6 44. a8=Q Rxb6 45. Qg2+ Kh7 46. Rf8 Nxh5 47. Rxf7+ Kh6 48. Qg8 Ra6+ 49. Kb1 Nf6 50. Qg7+ Kh5 51. Rxf6 Rxf6 52. Qxf6 Bg5 53. Qf5 Kh4 54. f3 Kg3 55. Qxg5+ Kf2 56. Qd2+ Kg3 57. Qxd4 Kxf3 58. Qh4 Ke3 59. Kc2 Kf3 60. Kd2 Kg2 61. Ke2 Kg1 62. Kf3 Kf1 63. Qh1# 1-0

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:89

May 02, 2025

[Game log #51]

Here's the game between the team of Yuusuke and Rodeo and the team of Michiko and Doraaki that was featured in Chapter 87.

[Event "Fight against Ai"]
[Site "Tochigi City, Tochigi"]
[Date "2024.08.14"]
[Round "3"]
[Red "Yuusuke Shousen (1512)"]
[Blue "SPCM Himitsuchan (Michiko Azami) (2144)"]
[Yellow "Rodeo Gorou (250)"]
[Green "SPCM Himitsukun (Doraaki Soten) (700)"]

1. h4 c6 g11 k8 2. f3 c5 Qxb8 Qm8 3. Qxc5 Qxb8 Bg13 Qi4 4. Bxb8 Bxb8 Bxb8 Qxh4+ 5. Nh2 Nxb8 d11 Qc4 6. Qb6 Nd7 d10 Qb5 7. Qd8 Nb8 d9 Bh3 8. e4 O-O Rd10 Qxf1+ 9. Nxf1 c9 Nd12 Bb9 10. Qxc9 Ka11 Rxb10 Ba10 11. Qxa9 c11 Rxa10 j8 12. Qb10#

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:87

May 02, 2025

[Game log #50]

Here's the game from Chapter 86 between Mimoko and Doraaki. This one is a normal game, so there should be no issues copy/pasting it into an analysis engine.

[Event "N/A"]
[Site "Tochigi City, Tochigi"]
[Date "2024.08.14"]
[Round "N/A"]
[White "Mimoko Inoue (2714)"]
[Black "SPCM Himitsukun (Doraaki Soten) (700)"]
[Result "1-0"]

1. Nf3 Nf6 2. d4 e6 3. c4 d5 4. Nc3 Bb4 5. Bg5 Nbd7 6. cxd5 exd5 7. e3 c5 8. Be2 Bxc3+ 9. bxc3 Nb6 10. dxc5 Nbd7 11. Qd4 Nxc5 12. Qxc5 Bf5 13. Bb5+ Bd7 14. Ne5 Bxb5 15. Qxb5+ Qd7 16. Nxd7 Nxd7 17. Qxb7 O-O 18. Qxd7 d4 19. cxd4 Rfe8 20. Rc1 a5 21. Rc7 Rad8 22. Qxf7+ Kh8 23. Qxg7# 1-0

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:86

May 02, 2025

[Game log #49]

Here's the 4-player chess game from Chapter 85 between the team of Mimoko and Utami and the team of Safumi and Mizuse. This one's a bit longer than the previous 4-player chess game.

[Event "Fight against Ai"]
[Site "Tochigi City, Tochigi"]
[Date "2024.08.14"]
[Round "2"]
[Red "SPCM Himitsusan (Safumi Bouzi) (2550)"]
[Blue "Mimoko Inoue (2714)"]
[Yellow "SPCM Himitsusama (Mizuse Niimi) (2599)"]
[Green "Utami Enoki (1201)"]

1. h4 d5 g11 k8 2. Nk3 Nc6 Qxb8+ Qm8 3. Qh2 Qxb8 Bg13 Qj11 4. Qxb8+ Bxb8 Bxb8 Bm8 5. h5 Nxb8 k12 Qxg11+ 6. Bxb8 Nxb8 Ng13 k7 7. O-O d7 O-O Bk6 8. g4 Bxe2 Ni12 Qg10 9. Bxk6 Bxd1 h11 Qxk6 10. g5 Bxh5 Ne12 Nl9 11. Rh1 Bc10 d11 O-O-O 12. Rh10 Bh5 Nd10 Qf1#

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:85

May 02, 2025

[Game log #48]

Here's the 4-player chess game from Chapter 84 between the team of Okisato and Iori and the team of Tenju and Taira. I'm unsure if there's even a proper analysis engine for 4-player chess games, but here's the game anyway. It could be considered the fool's mate of team 4-player chess/fool's mate for green.

[Event "Fight against Ai"]
[Site "Tochigi City, Tochigi"]
[Date "2024.08.14"]
[Round "1"]
[Red "Okisato Tanabe (2525)"]
[Blue "SPCM Himitsuue (Taira Kuroshiro) (2631)"]
[Yellow "Iori Ishikiridokoro (1144)"]
[Green "SPCM Himitsutan (Tenju Kuroshiro) (1362)"]

1. h4 d6 g12 l7 2. Qxn8+ Qxf2 Bm7#

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:84

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