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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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Jan 06, 2025

To:SkeletonIdiot

To be honest, I was going back and forth on whether to have them truly be dead or not. Obviously, I went with having them be alive as I didn't want the story to end on a depressing note. That being said, I did fear many might perceive the parents being alive as a bit of an "asspull" so to say, which is why I made some small edits to previous chapters in order to better foreshadow the eventual prank. One such example is that Delina now makes a small remark that she doesn't want Jantar to come to her to update any more old smartphones. It's subtle, but it does provide a way to foreshadow the grand reveal.

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:29

Jan 06, 2025

Great 1st chapter. The debate really did draw in more than just Brigham, but what really caught my eye was the fact that this is set in 1989. Could there perhaps be some parallels to the fall of the Berlin wall in this story?

The World Doesn't Change So Easily

Chapter:1

Jan 06, 2025

This is easily my favorite chapter yet. I was immersed from start to finish. That being said, I do have a small critique. I get the boldened text is for emphasis, but a part of me feels it would be better if the text was unboldened. The first case when it's just "Lucy's plush turtle" is fine, but the other instances I feel don't need to be boldened. Otherwise, amazing chapter.

The Drift of Time

Chapter:3

Jan 06, 2025

To:Bakajanai69

I'm glad you're liking the dynamic between Hana and Irina as well as Lyn's character. Lyn's easily the side character that pops up the most aside from the main cast, so look forward to seeing more of her antics as the story goes on.

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:3

Jan 06, 2025

To:Ćunfre

Thanks for checking this out. I'm glad you feel the plot flows well and that the immersion is good. As for humans evolving into smartphones, it's more in the sense that they now have all the apps of a smartphone, camera, internet surfing, instant messaging, etc, all biologically built in. I hope you enjoy what's to come in this story. 😁

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:3

Jan 06, 2025

And there's the Spiderman reference we were all waiting for. The prophecy has been fulfilled.

Hi Flyers!

Chapter:15

Jan 06, 2025

To:kazesenken

The piano here is sort of like that. The angle I'm going for is that music has evolved to the point that there are more notes to play. I also wanted an epic scene of Delina playing the Moonlight sonata. But if you thought the piano was crazy, wait until you see the violin performance.

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:19

Jan 06, 2025

To:kazesenken

We all have our kinks, but it most certainly is a staple in my works. Bald girls are hot.😎

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:18

Jan 05, 2025

To:Rowan.Burns

It's an action-adventure stealth game, that tends to parody the Metal Gear series.

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:10

Jan 05, 2025

[Game log #191]

Here's the game from Chapter 310 between Rasputin and Vesna. And with that, Rasputin has not only defeated 13 players simultaneously, but a 14th as a bonus. Rasputin really is a force to be reckoned with.

[Event "?"]
[Site "Budapest, Hungary"]
[Date "2024.09.19"]
[Round "?"]
[White "Vesna Moroz (2499)"]
[Black "Rasputin Vasilyevich (2802)"]
[Result "0-1"]
[Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis?tab=analysis"]

1. c4 e5 2. Nc3 Nf6 3. Nf3 Nc6 4. g3 d5 5. cxd5 Nxd5 6. Bg2 Bc5 7. Nxe5 Nxc3 8. Bxc6+ bxc6 9. dxc3 Qxd1+ 10. Kxd1 Bxf2 11. Rf1 Bc5 12. Rxf7 Bd6 13. Bg5 h6 14. Rxg7 hxg5 15. Rxg5 Be7 16. Rg6 Bf5 17. h4 Rd8+ 18. Ke1 Rd5 19. Rxc6 Rxe5 20. Rxc7 Bg4 21. Kd2 Rxe2+ 22. Kd3 Rh6 23. Rxa7 Rd6+ 24. Kc4 Be6+ 25. Kb4 Rxb2+ 26. Ka5 Rd5+ 27. Ka4 Bd7+ 28. Rxd7 Rxd7 29. h5 Ra7# 0-1

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:310

Jan 05, 2025

[Game log #190]

Here's the game from Chapters 308 and 309 between Rasputin and Muazzez. Only one game remains until Rasputin's romp is complete.

[Event "?"]
[Site "Budapest, Hungary"]
[Date "2024.09.19"]
[Round "?"]
[White "Rasputin Vasilyevich (2802)"]
[Black "Muazzez Başak (2269)"]
[Result "1-0"]
[Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis?tab=analysis"]

1. h4 e5 2. c4 d5 3. cxd5 Qxd5 4. Nc3 Qc6 5. Nf3 Nd7 6. d4 Bb4 7. Bd2 Bxc3 8. Bxc3 Ne7 9. dxe5 O-O 10. Rc1 a5 11. Bd4 Qe6 12. Ng5 Qg6 13. e3 h6 14. Bd3 Nf5 15. g4 hxg5 16. gxf5 Qh6 17. Rxc7 Rd8 18. Qb3 a4 19. Qd5 gxh4 20. e6 a3 21. exf7+ Kh7 22. f6+ g6 23. Qe4 Qh5 24. Qxg6+ Qxg6 25. Rxh4# 1-0

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:309

Jan 05, 2025

Author's Commentary #309:

Time to talk about Chapter 309: There was a cat that really was gone.
The Zzez is here, but unfortunately, Rasputin pulled an Aizen on everyone, which means in a sense, Muazzez got Momo'd. Anyway, let's give the bald girl her bio.

ムアゼズ・バシャク (Muazzez Başak) is Muazzez's name would be spelled in katakana.

Her birthday is October 14, which is Be bald and free day.

Her favorite piece is the queen.

As mentioned in the chapter, she's half-Russian, half-Turkish, and is currently representing the Turkish women's team. She also just recently, seemingly, became a bald fetishist. Ai would have loved to meet her, and funnily enough, both have the same birthday which coincidentally enough, is shared with Argentine international master, Faustino Oro.

There's a lot of mystery surrounding Muazzez, though I will reveal that her going bald is key to the puzzle. But with Muazzez down, all hope now rests on Vesna's shoulders. Next chapter will be the finale, and from a cinematic standpoint, the upcoming game is easily a top 10 best games in the series contender. Get ready to rave, because if you know the lyrics to Rasputin, you know what the chorus line is.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:309

Jan 05, 2025

[Game log #188]

Here's the 7 games from Chapter 307 between Rasputin and various players. I think this will hold the record for most games in a single game log in the entire series.

[Event "?"]
[Site "Budapest, Hungary"]
[Date "2024.09.19"]
[Round "?"]
[White "Rasputin Vasilyevich (2802)"]
[Black "Lieke Van Oldenbarnevelt (2423)"]
[Result "1-0"]
[Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis?tab=analysis"]

1. d4 f5 2. Bg5 h6 3. Bh4 g5 4. e4 gxh4 5. Qh5# 1-0

[Event "?"]
[Site "Budapest, Hungary"]
[Date "2024.09.19"]
[Round "?"]
[White "Jadwiga Abgarowicz (2646)"]
[Black "Rasputin Vasilyevich (2802)"]
[Result "0-1"]
[Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis?tab=analysis"]

1. e4 e5 2. Nf3 Qh4 3. Nxe5 Qxe4+ 4. Be2 Qxe5 5. f4 Qd4 6. Kf1 Bc5 7. g4 Qf2# 0-1

[Event "?"]
[Site "Budapest, Hungary"]
[Date "2024.09.19"]
[Round "?"]
[White "Rasputin Vasilyevich (2802)"]
[Black "Phạm Thị Meisa (2380)"]
[Result "1-0"]
[Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis?tab=analysis"]

1. g4 g5 2. d4 f5 3. gxf5 Nf6 4. e4 Nxe4 5. Qh5# 1-0

[Event "?"]
[Site "Budapest, Hungary"]
[Date "2024.09.19"]
[Round "?"]
[White "Rasputin Vasilyevich (2802)"]
[Black "Justin Beaver (1994)"]
[Result "1-0"]
[Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis?tab=analysis"]

1. a4 e5 2. e4 f5 3. exf5 g6 4. fxg6 hxg6 5. d4 exd4 6. Qxd4 Kf7 7. Bc4+ Ke7 8. Qe5# 1-0

[Event "?"]
[Site "Budapest, Hungary"]
[Date "2024.09.19"]
[Round "?"]
[White "Collette Femme-Fatale (2600)"]
[Black "Rasputin Vasilyevich (2802)"]
[Result "0-1"]
[Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis?tab=analysis"]

1. d4 Nf6 2. c4 e5 3. dxe5 Ng4 4. Nf3 Nc6 5. Bf4 Bb4+ 6. Nbd2 Qe7 7. a3 Ngxe5 8. axb4 Nd3# 0-1

[Event "?"]
[Site "Budapest, Hungary"]
[Date "2024.09.19"]
[Round "?"]
[White "Rasputin Vasilyevich (2802)"]
[Black "Zabel Yeremyan (2393)"]
[Result "1-0"]
[Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis?tab=analysis"]

1. b4 e5 2. Bb2 Bxb4 3. Bxe5 Nc6 4. Bxg7 Nge7 5. Bxh8 Kf8 6. a3 Bxa3 7. Rxa3 d5 8. e3 Qe8 9. Bd3 Bg4 10. Qxg4 Ne5 11. Qg7# 1-0

[Event "?"]
[Site "Budapest, Hungary"]
[Date "2024.09.19"]
[Round "?"]
[White "Rasputin Vasilyevich (2802)"]
[Black "Sommer Lyserød (2107)"]
[Result "1-0"]
[Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis?tab=analysis"]

1. e4 b6 2. d4 Bb7 3. Bd3 f5 4. exf5 Bxg2 5. Qh5+ g6 6. fxg6 Nf6 7. gxh7+ Nxh5 8. Bg6# 1-0

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:307

Jan 05, 2025

More backstory for the supporting cast is always a welcomed addition.

Hi Flyers!

Chapter:14

Jan 05, 2025

The fact that Ren got aroused by the torture reminds me of a scene from the game, UnMetal. I won't spoil the scene, but if you know, you know.

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:10

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