Feb 16, 2019
So far this is really interesting. The stone just what is it? and where did it come from? You're description of the setting is really helpful, I think I can almsot picture the 1st and 2nd trial that the man is going through.
Receivig great power for the life of his appearance, what drama in the begining, this is a really nice touch. The emotion of sadness that you feel after knowing that he will grow up without his parents!
Awesome first chapter! (Don't forget to check me out!)