Feb 17, 2019
This is really interesting... was the main character in an accident? what happened in her past?
These are some of the questions that came to my mind as I read the prologue, I would say making the reader ask questions, makes us want to know more, but I want to know why Aaron and Mei are leaving.
Starting us off with drama between the main character and her family is quite an awesome touch. Though I am a bit lost as to where the story is taking place... what is the reader following exactly?
Maybe when I get to your next chapter I will understand a little bit more. Awesome Job. Don't Forget to check out Utopia The First Journey and The Awakening!