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Hi, I'm Am the writer.
I love reading Motivational books, Fantasy books, and Manga. I believe that books can teach you a lot of things, maybe one the most important things is how to think outside of the box.
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Aug 02, 2018
Short, but Wonderful! Your teasing the reader to ask themselves to find out the meaning behind your words. Great job Melodias! (ง'̀-'́)ง
Aug 01, 2018
This is really cool! The beginning was really nice, but when reaching the end of the first chapter I realised that things were a little bit rushed. Especially the part when Tsukabe transitioned into the new world. As a reader I wanted to experience the thought of being pulled into a new world, so don't be afraid to increase the length of the important parts of your chapters because it helps the readers to become more intertwined with the story or protagonist.
Jul 31, 2018
To:MrZombie
Thanks!
This is beautiful, yet tragic. I could feel my heart pounding in your words for they had meaning and an urge to never give up. Why would such a dushbag do that? Inside I'm angry, but happy that her love still goes on! I'm want to no more. Great job! \ (•◡•) /ಥ_ಥ
This is really cool! How did you make it?
To:Chris
No problem, I'd be happy to! \ (•◡•) /
This is a really cool beginning, the character seems like the kind of protagonist that's lazy and doesn't want much to do with life, but we all know that's what makes the main character interesting and fun. I can't wait to begin the next chapter and see how the story develops, great job!
This is an awesome beginning! You draw the reader with excitement and action, only to surprise them with a shocking twist. Then you have them follow the main character into his new life. what an amazing way to start. \ (•◡•) /
Jul 28, 2018
This was an awesome 2nd chapter! I love the new development on the character faith, and can't wait to see who she becomes. Ungras is a very nice touch, a protective and trustful friend in deed! Can't wait for chapter 3.
Jul 10, 2018
To:Basic Baka
No problem! Amazing job!
Jul 03, 2018
This is really cool! You make me feel as if I was apart of the game myself! This is certainly one of the unique stories here on honey feed that have attempted to do something differently than others. The experience was awesome, it was as if I started out as a child and slowly started to get up, taking one step at a time! This is truly interesting way to start. You pull me along Roreru! Great Job!
This is really amazing! I love how you have started the story, I was able to visualize and feel the debt, and the pure drama of the actions of the main character Lillianna and the fowl demon Diara! I can't wait to read the next chapter! This is truly an amazing beginning!
Jun 27, 2018
This really is a really cool and neat beginning! I agree with Lieze Aura about your concept. It's different from most of the stories I've read so far, which makes it kind of unique! (｡◕‿◕｡)
Mar 20, 2018
I love how you're trying to accomplish the SAO feel. But to help the readers understand you should be a little bit more descriptive, help us picture the attacks and setting more!\ (•◡•) /
Feb 04, 2018
Awesome!
