Dec 20, 2024
BL end.
Jokes aside, I quite enjoyed this little romp around the two sides of the political fence. I think the thing you do best is to get into the head of the characters and wrap the reader up in their turmoils. I could definitely tell the moments where you hit your groove and was kinda jiving in the dialogue and flow. Other times, it did feel a little jumpy in the scene transitions. But overall, it was an enjoyable, be in the moment, live free or die hard, experience that got you rooting for some kind of resolution for Dorian and Avery. And that you gave in the end.
Cheers!
