Jan 22, 2025
Will "Androids of the Glass Chamber" be your next novel? š
Ah, turning Phase Three into a socializing game. I see now where your username comes from LMAO
Loving how chaotic and unpredictable everything is. Lots of cool ideas popping off at once. That said, it's a bit tricky to keep up with everything. Between the cleaning bots, the cheering crowd, the body dragging, and the camera screen, it feels like a lot is happening all at once. Maybe itād help to slow down in a couple of spots so some of these moments can really shine.
For example, when Eligh and Mara see themselves on the screens. It's such a trippy, surreal moment. It'd be cool to dig a little deeper into what's going through their heads.
