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Don’t ruffle my feathers with bad prose.
Current reading list (not in order): Hotwired! Air Born BlackBrain The World Doesn't Change So Easily Red Line Finding Ezri Eclipse Guardians Seike so much to read @_@
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Jan 08, 2025
To:obliviousbushtit
Hi bushtit! Tysm for reading all the way to the end. You don't know how happy that makes me feel! I've been meaning to finish your story too, but with work and now the LA fires, I haven’t had the time to read anything lately 😓 Once things settle down, I’ll def get to it. Thanks again for rooting for me!
Jan 04, 2025
To:t_tomodachi22
Omg my internet totally spazzed out when I posted that comment. I think it ended up going through like three times 💀 So sorry for the spam 😅
Thanks for the comment Yoruichi! Super happy to hear you’re enjoying it! I'm so glad someone finally noticed that Axel might not be the most morally upstanding guy LMAO Everyone thought he was gonna be the MC too 💀
To:chibiandreea
Originally I planned for them to talk things through, but then I thought people wouldn't like a lot of dialogue so I decided why not violence 😈
Thanks again for the comment! If I made the first ride free and had her jack up the price then she def would've been the true villain of the story LMAO
And as a hen I won't be qualified to go on the show 😌
Jan 03, 2025
You know when Octavius done fudged up when you're getting BASHED with a tablet LMAO
Anyway, solid start! Really sets things up for the next chapters.
The way you describe the old world tech like cassette tapes (which should be old old world tech LMAO) and PCs is super cool. The banter between the Bane and Rocco is nicely written too.
Btw, your cover is straight fire (Get it? I'll see myself out...)
I think you totally nailed the dangerous/adrenaline vibe here. Also, Kaien feels more like a mom than the older brother 😂
Whoever is in charge of that jumbotron, give them a raise LMAO Loving Mara's sass too. Overall, really fun chapter!
Nice world building with Amelia. The blend of tech like the robot with old-school traditions like the "Contract" and the dancing ritual is pretty cool
I was wondering when someone was going to have a transfer student in their story LMAO
Anyway, loving the way you set up the time travel twist. Interesting dynamic you got going here- wonder where you'll take it 🧐
Lucy's dynamic with Leo reminds me of Winry and Ed from FMA. It'd be cool to see what else she's got in her workbench!
*insert that's rough buddy meme* for Leo
Anyway, love the action in this chapter. Leo's desperation really came through.
If we could use HP as currency in this day and age then I would not live past the age of like 10 LMAO
