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Weaver of tales. Loves to make things by word or by hand.
Aug 14, 2025
Has an Alice in Wonderland feel to the plot, but with a horror vibe. The most engrossing chapter so far.
Aug 12, 2025
Unusual twist of childhood before telhe death and rebirth memory. You've got a particular flavor in yoir writing that is interesting and light. Very fun.
Aug 08, 2025
OK, Kuro might not be my favorite.
Hard start to an Isekai story. Hopefully Grace can turn the devil out of doors and make a heaven of it.
Love the cat's name!
The idea of the Isekai being Hell is different and I'm looking forward to where you take it.
Aug 06, 2025
Love the Truck-kun fake out. The Truck-kun in my book is more up front, and you dodge it entirely. Nice.
You've set Grace up as an interesting character. Looking forward to reading more.
Jul 25, 2025
Has some Dr. Stone premise on science, and this chapter reads almost like a summary of the first half of an entire Isekai. This could even be divided into 5-10 chapters depending on detail. I think I lot of people will be engaged by this premise.
Jul 11, 2025
To:aethercowboy
I'm doing one with a series of Isekai too, but as a comedy. My protagonists name takes the 'I' and 'Se' symbols from Isekai and makes the name Seo Igita. Might be overly subtle.
Jul 10, 2025
From the name (Chozen, nice, and the fact that common readings for it are 朝善 or 長善 meaning basically "good morning" or "extended good") and the quick characterization, the tone is fun and clever.
Great opening.
Jul 09, 2025
Evocative opening. The desire to produce a closer description and to return to the trauma fits survivor guilt very well. Looking forward to reading more.
Where I'm doing a comedy Isekai, reading this felt like whiplash 😅
Smooth start to the adventure, nice variation from "fast" Isekai, and the characterization works.
The imagery evoked the cover of the book nicely.
Oh boy, strong start.
The amount of dred and blood sets this apart from other Isekai openings. Plenty to pull the reader forward.
Jun 27, 2025
This book fulfills all of the promises it makes. Clear characters, solid plot, and magic.
I liked the 'Freya' name to keep the cultural theme, especially because Symphon in my book (partially) comes from the same basic cultural background.
Great work.
I caught the italization of "linguistic" meaning either 'of language' or "tongue". Connor might be catching on...
Excited for the conclusion.
To:Sakura Mazaki
I'm hoping to post them here. In the wild event that this gets picked up by Novelous for the contest, then perhaps over there.
I tend to like twisting, complicated stories and slowly I'm learning to make them enjoyable. I have a ways to go, but I really appreciate your comments on this book.
Jun 25, 2025
Everything back to normal.
"The Girl Who Fell From the Sky: How Orsted Tamed Janice". Lol.