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Literate_Manul

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registered at: Jul 02, 2025

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Oct 06, 2025

Nice transition into the new world!
The imagery of glowing fields, twin moons, and scents is beautiful, I'm already curious how that new world is gonna be like :3

Another World, Another Soulmate

Chapter:3

Oct 06, 2025

To:AlexOtaku

Ah you're right, I totally overlooked that it's just recommended, thanks for clarifying! Well, you definetly concluded it well, guess I'll have to check out your other works too then :D

How a Pink Diamond Talisman Turned Me from a Graduate Student into a Warrior Princess

Chapter:6

Oct 06, 2025

To:Kawaii Koi

Hehe no problem at all, don't push yourself too hard, I can wait :D

Another World, Another Soulmate

Chapter:2

Oct 06, 2025

Damn, I really love the magic system you created. The whole concept with the different ‘Flames’ and the aligned 'schools of magic' really works, especially since you gave it an actual explanation (Mother Moon) for why such a thing exists.
This uniqueness makes your world feel both structured and full of mystery. Honestly, compared to this, the magic system in my own novel (some kind of essence system) feels kinda boring, lol.

Children of Mother Moon

Chapter:10

Oct 06, 2025

Nice ending! I really enjoyed it :) Just a little heads-up: it looks like you’re about 300 words above the limit, so you might need to trim it down at some point

How a Pink Diamond Talisman Turned Me from a Graduate Student into a Warrior Princess

Chapter:6

Oct 06, 2025

To:Kawaii Koi

next chapter, when? :3

Another World, Another Soulmate

Chapter:2

Oct 06, 2025

To:AlexOtaku

Hehe, maybe! I’ll leave that to the reader’s imagination ;3

Four Shots Left

Chapter:4

Oct 05, 2025

Damn, that escalated quickly. I didn’t expect the sudden brutality, but it really keeps the tension high, so it fits well.

Curious to see the clash between the villains and Kikyo! :o

How a Pink Diamond Talisman Turned Me from a Graduate Student into a Warrior Princess

Chapter:5

Oct 04, 2025

To:AlexOtaku

Oh yeah, tell me about it… word count is always such a struggle! During the isekai contest I had one story that went way over and I had to cut myself down, and another one where I barely managed to hit the limit in time xD

Anyway, I’m really curious how you’re going to wrap this story up in a satisfying way. I’ll definitely read it and share my thoughts with you once I’m done :3

How a Pink Diamond Talisman Turned Me from a Graduate Student into a Warrior Princess

Chapter:4

Oct 04, 2025

The way you flip from evil darkness to all this pink energy is wild xD

I really liked the villains’ dialogues too, especially that mix of menace and a touch of flamboyance.

Also, the text doesn’t feel as “stuffed” anymore, which makes it much easier to read compared to the previous chapters, nice work :3

How a Pink Diamond Talisman Turned Me from a Graduate Student into a Warrior Princess

Chapter:4

Oct 04, 2025

To:Casha

Yesss, that’s exactly what I was going for! Glad that the tension worked for you and thanks againfor the detailed read :3
And yeah… survival odds aren’t looking too good for anyone but we'll see if anybody makes it xD

Four Shots Left

Chapter:3

Oct 04, 2025

To:Casha

Thanks a ton, man! Really glad the vibe and that sudden snap into violence hit the way I hoped. I realy appreciate you taking the time to drop such detailed thoughts :3

Four Shots Left

Chapter:2

Oct 03, 2025

I like how nothing can faze Kade, as he is always just genuinely curious and interested about the whole magic stuff :D

Children of Mother Moon

Chapter:3

Oct 03, 2025

Feels a bit weird and funny at the same time how Aria talks with an inanimate orb xD but I guess that's just the overload from the whole breakup with Haruto.

I really like the story so far, the first chapter was already heartbreaking and I'm looking forward to the next chapter since I love good romance stories. :)

Another World, Another Soulmate

Chapter:2

Oct 03, 2025

Damn, I have to admit that's the first time a story has hooked me that much here on HF.

Maybe it's just personal taste, but your writing style, the nice balance of vivid descriptions, inner emotions and well timed dialogues is exactly what makes a good novel in my opinion.

I’ll definitely be reading the rest of it :3

Children of Mother Moon

Chapter:1

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