Oct 22, 2025
It took me a while to understand what the heck was going on in that chapter, not gonna lie.
So in the beginning, it's just a vision Barbara has of a future she imagined, right?
Then it shifts to her backstory... how her parents died?
And then it's obviously the present again, with their plan unfolding, Barbara staying behind as the last one in the camp until she launches herself into the air and flies to the ship.
Loved the action and the tense atmosphere of flesh and fire, but sometimes it could’ve been a bit clearer.
Or maybe I’m just too dense, haha xD
Anyway, good work!