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Nov 27, 2025

Though Zenko isn't practically 'dead', her sacrifice still was a sad moment I hope we'll see her again!

The impact would be greater though if you'd included some thoughts of Kaito and Yuki, right now it feels a bit too descriptive for such a big loss.

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:17

Nov 25, 2025

To: Epti

You could still try to include it via dialogue at some point if it bothers you.

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:13

Nov 25, 2025

Thanks for pointing out the hierarchy, it made differentiating between the 'Reaper classes' much easier 👍

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:13

Nov 24, 2025

Kaito’s overcoming the trauma of killing his own mother as a child hit hard.

Luckily for him, he has someone like Yuki ! :3

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:10

Nov 24, 2025

I love the dynamic of Kaito und Yuki fighting. It's actually quite similar to my own story, since one of the MC's also uses ice magic :3

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:9

Nov 20, 2025

I like the beginning. The very first story I ever wrote was a zombie story too. Looking forward where yours is heading.

The Zombie Apocalypse Started the Day I Got My First Girlfriend

Chapter:1

Nov 18, 2025

To:Schlitzohr

Why, thank you my dear Schlitzohr!

Drinking Buddies: Hangover In Another World

Chapter:33

Nov 18, 2025

To:Aura-

Thank you so much, Aura! I still haven't fully processed it, to be honest 🙈

Drinking Buddies: Hangover In Another World

Chapter:33

Nov 16, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

GAME OVER: You've been exposed!

Hooves and Wine: Escaping With My Satyr Wife To Another World

Chapter:16

Nov 16, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

Well, one of them atleast :D

Hooves and Wine: Escaping With My Satyr Wife To Another World

Chapter:15

Nov 16, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

Hmm… I’d say some descriptions felt a bit repetitive and disrupted the reading flow.

For example the part between „The ground shook…“ until „...more pillars emerged“ describes the red tiles and the upward-moving elements with those pillars in multiple similar beats.

(‘the tiles began to shimmer and move’, ‘the tiles shimmered‘, ‘the tiles started getting up’… that all describes the same moment and could be tightened a little.)

Condensing those would make the scene feel tighter and more impactful in my opinion.

But don’t get me wrong, that’s just my personal impression, and the vision is already very poetic and atmospheric! :3

Pliniad: Roman Genius Will Unite This Godforsaken Realm

Chapter:37

Nov 16, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

You're absolutely right! I think the argumentation of Pompanianus was very spot on, actually! It was just my personal opinion, since the story pulled me in alot, and I just got excited whether this might lead to some GoT-like betrayals in the future :3

Pliniad: Roman Genius Will Unite This Godforsaken Realm

Chapter:35

Nov 15, 2025

You really know how to make some incredible worldbuilding, Mike.

The description of the Lamia Society was awesome, and I liked the cultural particularities (like the thing with her obligation change after her fifth molting etc.).

The vision-part was stretched a bit too long for my taste, a few less sentences would have had the same impact. But that’s just a tiny thing.

Overall I really enjoyed reading your book Mike, I'm reallly looking forward to the next volume :)

Pliniad: Roman Genius Will Unite This Godforsaken Realm

Chapter:37

Nov 15, 2025

I love those chapters that feel like a new beginning, that makes it also a satisfying ending.

Looking forward for the continuation of the story 🔥

Pliniad: Roman Genius Will Unite This Godforsaken Realm

Chapter:36

Nov 15, 2025

Hmm... relying on the loyalty of the cats in their army when the queen might revolt some day is a bold move by Pompanianus.
History showed that this might not work out for them. It didn’t for Varus and the German Auxiliarys under Arminius...

Pliniad: Roman Genius Will Unite This Godforsaken Realm

Chapter:35

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