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Dec 08, 2025

To:Mai

I actually thought this wouldn’t sell well in Japan, since most of the people there probably wouldn’t get most of the references (Star Wars, LotR, Back to the Future etc...), but ofc I'd like to be proved wrong xD

Drinking Buddies: Hangover In Another World

Chapter:10

Dec 06, 2025

Only one more chapter ...

Nice idea with the "guide" at the end of the chapter for clarification. I liked that.

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:30

Dec 06, 2025

To:Mai

If Thing ever met Handy, I guess he would start a fistfight immediately xD

Drinking Buddies: Hangover In Another World

Chapter:14

Dec 06, 2025

To:Mai

Do you mean ‘very isekai’ in a good way, or in the ‘oh no, not again’ way? xD

Drinking Buddies: Hangover In Another World

Chapter:18

Dec 06, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

Do you think the plan makes any sense? I wanted it to be some kinda unexpected plot twist, but did I miss something that maybe makes no sense?

Hooves and Wine: Escaping With My Satyr Wife To Another World

Chapter:20

Dec 06, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

Yep probably not his wisest decision

Hooves and Wine: Escaping With My Satyr Wife To Another World

Chapter:21

Dec 05, 2025

To: Epti

I did enjoy it :3

But if there’s only one thing I personally missed, it would be a single chapter before the final clash, something more lighthearted, maybe even humorous, to give me as a reader a little time to breathe. (The chapter 'a moment of peace' is already inside the final clash so I dont count that)

That way, the finale would have an even stronger impact.

But that’s just a tiny personal thing, please don’t take it as criticism :3 <3

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:29

Dec 05, 2025

Such a beautiful conclusion to the story.

You managed to create, on the one hand, a feeling of relief and satisfaction, showing that the mission was successful and evil was defeated; but on the other hand, there's still this unsettling feeling because of the sacrifice that made it possible...

Without that, the conclusion wouldn’t have such a strong impact, I have to admit it.

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:29

Dec 05, 2025

To: Epti

You're reading my story! Thank you so much, Epti!

Since, magic-wise, the MCs in your story and mine are very similar, I’d love your opinion :3

Neko Tokyo Koorisakuya

Chapter:2

Dec 05, 2025

To:Mai

Aw thank you so much, thats so sweet of you

Drinking Buddies: Hangover In Another World

Chapter:0

Dec 04, 2025

I liked the detail with Mitsuki Haiku knocking terrified at the display. So the Mitsuki Haikus are in fact living inside the devices like tiny oompa loompas, right? Right?!

Ahem, anyway, nice chapter, I love your idea with the portrayal of the screen and the use of different fonts, that's awesome

Percussive Maintenance: Where Do Naughty Robots Go When They Die?

Chapter:3

Dec 04, 2025

Not gonna lie, the ending kinda reminded me of Princess Mononoke when the wave of life force floods the chamber, covering everything in moss etc., but I liked that very much, it was really touching

... but also bittersweet, since... well you know... Yuki ...

Looking forward for epilogue, but I can already say that your story was fun to read, the pacing was good and you did a great job :3

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:28

Dec 04, 2025

To:AuthorAtish

Haha yeah, I know AI art is actually not that bad anymore, but still... xD

Drinking Buddies: Hangover In Another World

Chapter:9

Dec 04, 2025

To:AuthorAtish

Hehe you could be right about that :3

Drinking Buddies: Hangover In Another World

Chapter:6

Dec 04, 2025

To:AuthorAtish

Thanks alot Atish, it's the first time I write something in the comedy genre so it means a lot that it sent you falling down your couch xD

Drinking Buddies: Hangover In Another World

Chapter:1

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