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Jan 13, 2026

It’s nice to see how Nataria has changed since the first chapters.

You can really tell that she’s finally gotten the human connection she’d been missing for a long time because of her career and her mother...

She’s no longer calculating at all, but almost impulsive now, especially when it comes to Senri’s well-being :3

Nice twist with the audience slowly becoming aware of their relationship and the condition that they now have to avoid each other!

That’s not going to be easy, and I’m curious to see what Senri will say about it :3

Hide Me In Your Heart

Chapter:28

Jan 12, 2026

To:Mike Psellos

I hope at one point in the story they'll start singing "country roads", if not I'll just imagine that they do

Moosetrack Ridge

Chapter:5

Jan 12, 2026

To:Casha

Don’t worry, you do it extraordinarily well I can tell, because most stories I read so far don’t really feel Japanese at all... they feel more like westerners (especially in terms of mindset) with Japanese names, but I know it's not easy, I struggled with it a lot too

Hide Me In Your Heart

Chapter:27

Jan 12, 2026

"I'll do anything 👀"

Anyway, forget about 'young kristys girls and panzer' , I want 'young Cassies Lacrosse adventures' and I want it NOW !

Srsly I liked that chapter alot, like all of this story, its great stuff

Moosetrack Ridge

Chapter:5

Jan 12, 2026

I don’t know why, but somehow my mind concluded that when her grandfather and her mum came out of the fog, they were already dead... and Sara as well, and that the strange girl was some kind of Grim Reaper...

I’m so glad it turned out to be just another wholesome fairy tale and my mind is simply fucked up lol

Short Stories

Chapter:19

Jan 12, 2026

Oh. My. God. What an awesome and heartbreaking chapter!

Poor Senri... it must be awful to be reminded of his alcoholic father in such a way… It’s obvious that Takeshi and the producers did this deliberately, hoping to provoke a scandal...

I honestly expected him not to drink it, or for Nataria to step in, but of course she didn’t know about his aversion to alcohol, so why would she?

When she then comforted him… absolutely perfect timing for a love confession!

A kiss would have made me happy, but it made sense that, given Senri’s state, it would have been the wrong moment...

Besides, one mustn’t forget that it’s a Japanese setting xD which, by the way, you convey brilliantly!

Now it's time for revenge against that awful producers! I really hope there will be a ending like the Truman Show *.* Can't wait!

Hide Me In Your Heart

Chapter:27

Jan 12, 2026

To:Mara

Thank youuu... <3

Four Shots

Chapter:7

Jan 12, 2026

To:Mara

Thats what I planned too. But then I didn’t know how to finish the story so turns out it was just his "imagination" :honey_sweat:

Lazy writing I know xD

Four Shots

Chapter:6

Jan 12, 2026

To:Mara

Thank you, I thought that way I could satisfy my hisfic needs

Four Shots

Chapter:4

Jan 12, 2026

To:Mara

Guilty as charged here, watched reservoir dogs just before writing this xD

Four Shots

Chapter:2

Jan 11, 2026

To:Mara

Thanks Mara! Yeah exactly, it was my first try on monthly here :3

Four Shots

Chapter:1

Jan 10, 2026

Once again, another awesome, heartwarming chapter!

Though I think Nataria could have given Senri a stone as a gift, he would have been just as happy xD

But that’s how it is when you’re in love

What she ultimately came up with as a present was, of course, the icing on the cake!

It hardly gets more personal than that, and he will undoubtedly never throw those notes away, there’s so much love in them <3

But judging by how it looks, this was probably the last heartwarming chapter for now, if I understood the ending correctly…

I’m already a little scared..

Hide Me In Your Heart

Chapter:26

Jan 09, 2026

Little tip, Senri: if you want to stare, just put on a nice pair of reflective sunglasses. Works every time for me

Jokes aside, part two of your “beach episode” wrapped things up perfectly!

I loved how you slowly built the tension toward the almost-confession, only for Momo to burst the moment like a bubble by calling out, before immediately reigniting the spark with that touch on Nataria’s hip

And finally, they exchanged numbers!

The whole “write–delete–write–delete–send–panic” was spot on, exactly what it’s like texting your crush, especially the panic when there’s no reply after five minutes xD

The birthday drop then neatly tossed the ball back into Nataria’s court, oh, this is going to be delightful!

Hide Me In Your Heart

Chapter:25

Jan 09, 2026

To:Casha

Thank you once more for reading yet another story of mine
Despite it being 'only' a monthly short story, it made a lot of fun challenging myself to write something more deep and profound this time. Glad you liked the message of it <3

Wolpertinger

Chapter:5

Jan 09, 2026

To:Casha

OMG, you really wrote a review, I don’t know what to say…
Sadly, there is no PM function on HF, so I’ll just thank you here!
And let me tell you: seeing that review this morning not only made my day, but my whole week
So yeah, thank you very much from the bottom of my heart!

Neko Tokyo Koorisakuya

Chapter:32

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