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Jan 08, 2026

Oh boy, the moment the car turned on its headlights and Aoyama came into view, I knew it couldn’t mean anything good! She felt much more like a prison warden than a producer here, very fitting for the overall theme of the chapter (after all, it’s not called “A Gilded Cage” for nothing right? xD)

I also rerally enjoed the conversation the next day between Senri, Hibiki, and Shou, it was really well written as usally.

I think it might have been the first time the three “men” actually sat down and talked among themselves, and their analytical discussion felt very appropriate.

They’re right too! The confessionals are going to be interesting in the regard of what happened between Senri and Nataria...

But now I’m really looking forward to the swimming competition! Personally, I’m hoping the focus will be more on the girls ;3 but that’s probably just a matter of taste

Hide Me In Your Heart

Chapter:23

Jan 08, 2026

To:Casha

Casha, thank you so much for reading my story and for all your lovely comments!

Toward the end, finishing each chapter got harder and harder (especially this christmas special) since I had a lot going on in my personal life, so it was definitely challenging!

Knowing that what I was trying to convey actually came across, thanks to your kind words on every chapter!, means a lot to me

Thanks for your support. You can always count on mine too :3

Neko Tokyo Koorisakuya

Chapter:32

Jan 07, 2026

Damn thats a rather tragic backstory. Im curious how Lynx could escape and what she had to endure during imprisonment

Tina & the World of Winter

Chapter:5

Jan 07, 2026

I see some parallels here to Ren and the Witch, tho this one seems to take another direction. Curious how it will go on!

Tina & the World of Winter

Chapter:4

Jan 07, 2026

I like the name of the squirrel. Ratatosk is unusual for sure.

Tina & the World of Winter

Chapter:3

Jan 07, 2026

A talking squirrel! Tina must have learned the "Speak with Animals" spell :3 (bg3 reference)

Tina & the World of Winter

Chapter:2

Jan 07, 2026

I like how overly dramatic Tina acts, just like you would expect it from a 13yo girl :3

Tina & the World of Winter

Chapter:1

Jan 06, 2026

It was already obvious that Senri feels the same way about Nataria, but it was still really nice to read it again clearly from his pov!

The fact that he actually hesitates with confessing to her, despite usually being so direct, really shows how much he’s grown and how he’s started to understand the whole showbiz thing!

Loved the follwing kitchen scene, you could literally feel Senri’s happiness at seeing Nataria instantly flip into jealousy the second he noticed Hibiki xD

I also loved how he immediately went on the offensive with the first-name offer, smart move, Senri-kun

But my favorite line was definitely: “it can’t be that bad” followed by “it was objectively that bad”

Hide Me In Your Heart

Chapter:22

Jan 06, 2026

To:Casha

Yayy! I'ts so awesome this landed for you the way I intended

Since the 'prologue arc' basically ended with the introduction of Purimura, I thought it would be a good way to end arc 1 as well.

Thank you so much Casha for reading it all the way through!!! (I know there is yet the christmas special but this here is where the story is basically concluded for now >.<)

Neko Tokyo Koorisakuya

Chapter:30

Jan 06, 2026

To:Casha

Yeah, that growth is exactly what I wanted to show with this fight! :3

I mean she is the daughter of a goddess afterall, so I thought it would be only realistic for her to have a lot of potential, it might get harder and harder for hale to catch up!

So glad that you liked it aswell !

Neko Tokyo Koorisakuya

Chapter:29

Jan 06, 2026

To:Casha

Ah your'e right, now that you mention it, shonen like Demon Slayer or MHA rlly do it all the time, don’t they? xD

And thanks for saying that

Neko Tokyo Koorisakuya

Chapter:28

Jan 06, 2026

To:Casha

I can definitely see that, guess that's what attracted me to CoMM in the first place, since I also wrote/read LitFic rather than LN!

U definetely improved regarding tightening things up, though 'overindulging descriptions' personally never bothered me :3

Hide Me In Your Heart

Chapter:20

Jan 06, 2026

To:Mara

The origin of the name isn't really clear, some suggest it may originate from the town of "Wolterdingen" other sources say it comes from "Walpurgis Night" which was called "Walper" in local dialect, so I guess its hard so know exactly... :3

Wolpertinger

Chapter:3

Jan 06, 2026

To: Epti

Thank you, Epti :3
I wanted to capture that bittersweet feeling too, after all, you do it so wonderfully in your own stories

Wolpertinger

Chapter:3

Jan 06, 2026

That was really touching, what Senri said about music and how it connects people. He’s absolutely right <3

The way he then pushed her into dancing that kids’ show dance was pure rom-com energy, funny and heartwarming at the same time, exactly how it should be. So sweet how she tripped and he even carried her back to her room!

And then that short, intimate moment at the bed! I was internally screaming the whole time, “Now! Go! Kiss! KISS!”, but sadly Mr. Bun interrupted…

Her inner love confession at the end was the perfect wrap-up, and I can’t wait for the moment when she finally says it to him!

Hide Me In Your Heart

Chapter:21

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