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Jul 22, 2026

How very interesting. I like the complexity youve layered in here by having the ogres come to save the day. And how the character, aged and weakened has developed this second wind or fighting spirit. Love to see it!

Let’s see if we’ve got ourselves a new ally here to help our matured hero get back on that adventuring path!

Of Sun and Sand

Chapter:7

Jul 22, 2026

To:Chezburger

It's all coming together!

The Ruby Oracle

Chapter:132

Jul 22, 2026

Very interesting. I can’t help but wonder even more why he was locked up, if his brother the king seems ready to welcome him home. What are we missing from this puzzle. I’m also a fan of the last name, Atlas and wonder if it has some greater meaning. He seems to know where he’s going, as the term would literally mean, but also, could it be that he holds the weight of the world on his shoulders?

It was indeed heartbreaking that he didn’t quite know how old he was or how long it had been. But damn does he bounce back fast.

Everyone Remembers the Hero Except Me

Chapter:5

Jul 21, 2026

So much going on! I love the idea of his memory being stripped away before the imprisonment. It really raises the question of what happened to him. What really went on in those years of the war. I can’t help but feel for the guy who seems to want to remember the stuff that continues to elude him.

The way the warden revered him was also interesting. It really makes me wonder not just who but what Felix is.

Meanwhile, I can’t help but wonder if Guard Mario and his brother Luigi are guarding the rainbow road. Sorry. Bridge.

Everyone Remembers the Hero Except Me

Chapter:4

Jul 21, 2026

To:Mara

Rolled the dice, and Ragart's name came up. He was giving Avii a hand, and, well, he had to go, lol. And I'm telling you, Sebastian is going to live a long and happy life. He's the real hero of this story.

MULE

Chapter:12

Jul 21, 2026

To:Jen_F

Bahaha, #Sebastianhasdonenothingwrong! Our tortured hero is having trouble getting help with his fighting. We can only hope that the cave-in doesn't horribly injure them. Ragart was at least quick. Who knows what will happen to everyone else. Like Sebastian living a long and happy life.

MULE

Chapter:12

Jul 21, 2026

To:Goosey

War is hell, and I definitely wanted to get that through in these chapters. Poor Ragart. Just finally showed a bit of humanity and gave Avii a hand...

MULE

Chapter:12

Jul 21, 2026

To:Jen_F

He must charge in to save the other mule, captors be damned. But what will the consequences of this action be?

MULE

Chapter:11

Jul 21, 2026

To:Gemini Daydream

Damn, you caught me. Commander is a troll and just doing this for the lols.

MULE

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2026

To:Gemini Daydream

It is a magical realm, far, far away. Full of bangers and mash and Union Jacks galore.

MULE

Chapter:0

Jul 21, 2026

To:C.D. Magone

Thank you! I wanted to give it a shot. Definitely not my strength. Hope you enjoy the story!

MULE

Chapter:0

Jul 21, 2026

Oh man, what a twist! There’s some time travel happening here and I am excited for it! I can’t help but wonder how far forward she was flung. Everything seems bad enough that it could easily be 5-10 years? Idk, need more to be sure.

I’m getting some sunfic vibes and I love it. The way the creatures until fear. The way the flow draws them. Then pressure to keep marching before a set time. Absolutely fantastic. I’m excited to be getting to follow this one as it releases!

Guardian of Wind

Chapter:5

Jul 21, 2026

Very interesting start! A prince fleeing for his life is definitely a tragic beginning for sure. I can’t help but wonder about his family lineage and how it will present itself as he grows and develops. Fingers crossed he doesn’t suffer too much. Or at least…just enough. It seems like running is challenging enough. So he’s relatable already lol.

Re:Incarnation • The Hundred Faces of Razzel Od Mithril

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2026

What a chaotic flight! I loved it. I have to say the focus on the ornate axe makes me wonder something. The way you describe that it felt strange and then the way the warden looked at it in his grasp. What is going on there? Coincidence? Why did the rookie guard have it?

Also, go Kite go!

Everyone Remembers the Hero Except Me

Chapter:3

Jul 19, 2026

To:Terrycat

That’s the meat and potatoes of it. Big baddah boom and straight to slavery. Avii, the only survivor of a cataclysm, is now a slave. From blue collar to shock collar.

MULE

Chapter:1

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