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Hello! I used to be on Honeyfeed way back then but had to retire due to some personal stuff. Now I'm back and I hope to enjoy all these brand new changes and new additions the page has to add.
You can find me at RoyalRoad as well!
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Aug 15, 2020
To:Nina Kamiya
I see, it /is/ a tricky topic and research is hard, however, maybe you could do your research and split it into parts and start from there? Especially for quantum theory! Maybe take parts that interest you and give them a different perspective creating something completely original, the possibilities are endless! In any case, I'll be eagerly awaiting if you decide to continue this one-shot one day, as well as all the others in the following updates ^^!
To:Smaco
U^ｪ^U
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Oh yes, however, knowing them all will happen eventually!
Barrels! (Reminds me of the Atelier games)
So far I'm truly linking how each girl is being developed slowly, showing us their own characteristics and personalization. Plutia seems to be the one stealing the spotlight a lot and I actually enjoy that since she is the guide to all of this. Mercy is so adorable though, I want to protect her.
Save him, huh? He seems very detached from the world so perhaps that could be a reason for concern. As for Alice, she really is cute with every single action she does. I'm glad things are slowly starting to build, as well as showing us in a small explanation of how battles are settled in your world, found it interesting that anyone at any given moment can challenge you.
Aug 14, 2020
This prologue sure was intense! Your writing style is very poetic and drew me in instantly. Getting a glimpse of the lore just makes me wonder how your world is built, so I'll be closely following this to see how it ends!
All the stories must be connected in some way due to the references. I'm sad this one came to an end, however, I will now continue in the next Whispering series. You do a fantastic job setting the eerie atmosphere!
This one was a one chapter resolution, fantastic. I got so enraged when Hannah didn't notice it was about herself and kept on saying how horrible that person was... It's so sad to know what there are people irl like that as well.
I like how, slowly, you are reeling us, readers, into the lore of your world. The first bit about Martha and Ivan was great! I'm super sure Martha is eventually going to find up something regarding this ex godson...
Interesting how the 5 people mentioned in here during class have been already part of the story and they can be challenged at any time. The way to explain the lore to the reader through a pop-quiz was brilliant, a different way of making exposition fun!
This was an interesting read and I'm saddened it's only a one-shot, due to all the lore that was formed about this presence, why it chose Hana, the demons, etc. It would be lovely to read a full story about them in the future!
Things are getting more and more interesting, and we once again get an outlook on how everyone fears Edelgard, the "change" she will bring and even dare to say she might cause something in Starkus just because she hangs out with him...
This chapter was different than the rest and I guess it closes the introduction/prologue segment of the novel. Interesting how smoothly things went for both of them to be roommates, as well as his revelation about the four magic circuits. Although Jayce might seem overpowered, the story focuses on Alice and I'm looking forward to seeing how their adventures turn out now that they are both members of their unique guild!
