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Hello! I used to be on Honeyfeed way back then but had to retire due to some personal stuff. Now I'm back and I hope to enjoy all these brand new changes and new additions the page has to add.
You can find me at RoyalRoad as well!
Aug 18, 2020
"It's not as if Sena will disappear" Why do I get red flags from this all of a sudden...? Overall, the chapter was great and we got to know Sena even more, I'm glad the three of them will possibly go together, I would feel bad if Lia got ommitted from the journey since she was a very relevant character on Volume 1! Keep it up!
More questions will be answered in the following chapters! I feel really sorry for Starkus' brother...
I truly enjoy these sides of the story, as well as you sprinkled lore about the god of the mortal world and how on the other world works with the Demon King and the contracts. So far so good, keep it up!
You truly are improving. Even if we have spent only one chapter getting to know Verona, her backstory is already really sad, which makes it understandable why she said what she did previously. I did find it a bit rushed though, especially that part with her father, but nonetheless you managed to deliver emotion on your penmanship!
Yuki does have it hard. He clearly intrigued but has no /actual/ interest at all and keeps on being pulled by Ichizen, dragged into this weird thing. He notices things his friend doesn't, so hopefully, that will come in handy!
With a name like that, I would be fed up too, haha. A curious bit of lore here though, you can be isekai'ed and return, to be sent over again. Seems like an endless cycle if you think about it. What would happen if someone suffered from that fate over and over again? Would that make them retain more memories? Be capable of being hypersensitive to the supernatural and be able to communicate and bend it to their will? That information opens a plethora of possibilities!
Ah yes, my suspicion was right! She sees her other attempts inside this haunted school. I do wonder though, that makes it a closed space that is struck in a certain time.
Aug 17, 2020
I'm surprised at how your writing style has developed in such a short span. This one felt quite a bit shorter than the rest, that's for sure. However, your writing improvement makes up for it!
Loving these chapters that lately are focusing on the world itself! How the system and even hierarchy works, the way Alice perceives everything makes us feel as if we the readers are her knowing the Capital for the first time, as well as her amazement with currency and the quest system. Here I am praying for their success at Moon Village!
I didn't see Claudia as the jealous type due to how well she cared for Edelgard at the start. I guess her breaking down was inevitable due to how much she loves Starkus.
Oh? I wonder what the Capitan will give Sebastian. Also, it seems another person without a relic has achieved a grand status, which gives his certainly a bit of encouragement, as well as hope. I'm just here wondering how the state of his room will be due to the Heller siblings there, haha.
Yet again, so far so good! I like the new cast of characters you've introduced in this chapter! It seems Ichizen's curiosity will never be satiated, poor Yuki. I'm sorry for not being able to come back to read earlier!
This was a great attempt to tackle down this issue that needs to be talked more often. I'm truly enjoying how even if the story has a nonsensical situation, the cases you present are real enough to make us remember that our reality is like that.
I'm back and I deeply enjoy your descriptions about Salem and her state of mind, as well as the environment and overall atmosphere. I can imagine everything so vividly as well as her pain and suffering, which makes me want to enter the novel and help her out.
Oh wow, I can guess that since the chapters are titled "Attempt #", the Fuyu she saw must be another Fuyu attempting to escape. It reminded me of Corpse PArty for some reason, and that is good because in that game they managed the eerie and spooky school atmosphere excellently and you have done so as well, your descriptions are so on point to give you the chills.