Jio Kurenai

Jio Kurenai

Author of Parable of the Renegades, or ParaRene for short.

Aspiring Game Designer and writer who loves it when games and stories get married to create an experience.

Criticism of my work is definitely welcome, so long as it's constructive!

I'm also looking forward to reading what you write! ;D

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June 21st, 2020 was the last time "Parable of the Renegades" made it to the #1 spot in both the Weekly and Monthly Rankings!

As this is my first web novel, I can't ever hope to describe how ecstatic I am! Thank you to all my readers for the rad comments, which I always make time to read. I hope I can continue to write prose that makes your already satisfying day even better!

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    Jun 05, 2018

    And Kudos to you for another finished volume!

    I'm actually very glad that the events ended up this way. E-Plus have just learned Kudo's berserk button and now they see that It's thanks to guys like Sherald and Shinezu (Was that the bald guy with glasses, btw?) that their adventures aren't always going to be about fun hunts, loot, leveling up and new equipment. There's the dark side too.

    Now then, I'd like to write about the progression. We got the E-Plus party getting to know each other and their first quest as a party starts out simple but later on becomes a little more personal because it reminds one of them of a traumatic experience leading to a breaking point that ends with the party's bond becoming stronger after learning of one's vulnerabilities. Very good job on that chapter by the way. I felt Kudo and Hinota's pain and I'll be looking back at that when I'm having trouble writing a scene that needs some feels. Guess next time, E-Plus will be more careful to not bite what they can't chew and also be better prepared for the unexpected.

    That also brings up a question to me. To adventurers, are monsters truly just treated as living treasure boxes like how dark adventurers treat ordinary people? Makes me really see them as similar aside from being adventurers. I mean after reading about Hinota reprimanding Kudo for almost killing a human being and the party getting hyped with Mizuri when she exclaimed that she's out for some monster blood, I can't help but think that adventures, in general, have warped perspectives. Not a bad thing by way. Humans are imperfect after all.

    To end this comment, I just want to say that I'm glad your story is taking this direction. A party that's always there for each other. I can wait a while for another HEC volume as I guess you want to publish your new work first. At least the copy-paste glitch of Honeyfeed has been fixed now.

    Cheers for a fun read. I'll be looking forward to what comes next! ;D

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    Hour Empty Child
    Chapter:134




    May 31, 2018

    To:Deleted User

    My apologies for the overdue reply.

    I always want to subvert expectations to help keep my story interesting so I'm really pleased with the potential you believe it has, and I'll do my best to keep it up.

    I wouldn't say Lucas and Rio have gotten intimate to the point that they are willing to go a step higher. Consider this as a mutual apology for the damage they have done to each other during their fight. As Rio stated in this chapter, she wanted Lucas to pay for personally attacking her, but re-opening the wounds he stitched closed was not what she had in mind. That was why she offered to treat them herself.

    Rio is not the type of person who's had plenty of experience in relationships whether it be one of friendship or romance thanks to her Renegade abilities and that only makes her crave it more. This is why she isn't good at keeping herself too reserved from Lucas as he is becoming someone who she feels will be spending time with for a while thanks to the blood-bound contract she placed on him. He's also got some qualities that she finds amusing or she feels can sympathize with and that makes her even more willing to let her guard down without being aware of it, but there's also a reason why she treats him like a bully instead of a friend.

    I'd like to mention some things about why Lucas continues to treat Rio with kindness even though she had turned his life into one that may dangle on a thread, but that would be a spoiler.

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    Parable of the Renegades [BETA Version]
    Chapter:22


    May 21, 2018

    To:Deleted User

    For a while now, the only notifications I kept getting were that someone added this novel to their library and nothing else. I'm really happy that one of them revealed themselves right now! I hope I'll know from now on that you'll be sticking around, and I hope you're looking forward to what happens next!

    You're not alone when it comes to making theories. I for one want to get good at that too, and I'm glad I have some readers who make such comments that I hope to learn from them, too.

    I apologize for any confusions regarding the abilities of the Renegades, but I'm glad the way Lucas understood it helped. Being a shonen battle manga fan, I've wanted to create my own battle system for a long time. That doesn't mean you can expect a fight every chapter though, I want to always create some sort of set-up before the inevitable slapdown. This volume, which will end in a few more chapters was meant to be all about how slowly Lucas' non-eventful life was slowly turning upside-down. Next volume will be when things truly start heating up.

    Your understanding of my main characters was very in-line with my intentions, by the way. Rio was heavily fleshed out for the reasons you have stated and Lucas was a little more subtle because his character will be exposed through his action in the present day. Doesn't mean we will be looking into his past often, but it's not out of the picture.

    It's the middle of the night for me as I wrote this reply, but getting a notification for a comment on my novel after such a long time was the key to waking me up. Not only that, I slept early because I had a jackhammer of a headache. Lo and behold, the comment cured it. True story. Guess I'll take the extra waking hours and motivation to continue writing, then. Thanks again! ;D

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    Volume 1 Cover
    Parable of the Renegades [BETA Version]
    Chapter:22