Don't have an account?
Already a Honeyfeed member?
Just an ordinary traveler passing through worlds. Also, an amateur writer with a dream.
What is an Achievement?
Nov 01, 2021
To:NoahTheReviewer
You'll like him even more in future chapters.
Thank you! I usually try to make each trope sense in the context of the stories I'm writing.
You're most definitely! This is someone who is native to this world. I knew I wanted the plot to revolve around the main character, and it moves around based on him alone without using his perspective at all. But I also took account that I didn't want the coworkers to always be by his side. Instead I used someone else, hoping that would take a completely different direction.
Thank you for the comments! If I'm being honest with you, I hardly focus on the plot and more on the characters which I certainly do need to improve. At this point, I just let the characters make the plot.
Thank you. I knew I wanted to explore different sides of the main character, just to add that tad bit of mystery, so I'm glad you are able to decipher through Juliana.
I try
To:Glitch
Yeah, I'm trying to explore some ways to make it appealing to read all the while challenging, if that makes sense.
To:ALTaccounti
Honestly, when I first wrote that, I sorta felt the same XD
Oct 28, 2021
This chapter is hilarious! I love how conservative he is and declines everything until Marilyn would agree to be his girl if he accepted. Puck being a girl is a surprise too! I can't wait for further interaction between each characters.
To:Joe Gold
Say no more, I'm loving this story more. Love No Mo Heroes and Chainsaw Man!
This is a nice take on the isekai genre, and I love it. Had me laughing as soon as the humans were summoned, also when Artyom arrived.
This chapter alone, top notch ngl. From giving us more info about Jack, then introducing Marilyn brings me back feelings of playing No More Heroes.
What a way to start the main character, love it!
Oct 09, 2021
Thank you for your intake on the demon trope! I promise you I'm trying to make each tropes sense in this story.
Oct 06, 2021
You are absolutely correct! Akimitsu is going to play a huge role for both Tsubasa and Kaito later down the future.
