Jun 14, 2023
Yeah, as ReoOVC mentioned your MC does have a similar vibe to Hachiman (haven't watched Classroom of the Elite 😖) and I think your story has a pretty cool take on the romance aspect. Seeing how your MC transforms from anti-love to pro-love over the course of the story would be a treat to read.
Though, I do think your writing can be a bit chunky at times, as in, it feels like a lot of information is being grouped up in individual paragraphs. It might be easier to read if the paragraphs (and ideas presented inside of them) are broken down and divided. That way, the reader can focus on the various ideas you're presenting individually and absorb them, instead of trying to cramp a whole thought process in one big lump.
But yeah, cool concept Aescwine! Kipidap 💪🏻