Jun 09, 2023
Y'know, I thought your story was Isekai at first based on the cover, but wow, I'm liking your setting very much. Present day, but from a perspective of a traditional family.
While there haven't been any major developments in the romantic route so far (that's fine), I like your style of writing. It's vivid without being overly verbose. And the characters so far have pretty clear voices to their respective dialogue. Solid writing, just want to see what you have in store in terms of the upcoming events and the progression of the romance.
Also, I did a quick check, but in your synopsis, you wrote Aya's family name as "Masauri" instead of "Masuri".
